题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华,你于2017年3月26号购买了一部iPhone 7手机,因有质量问题,要求该商店退换。请根据下列要点,用英文给该店经理写一封投诉信。
要点: 1. 问题: 手机无法上网,不能视频聊天;店内暂无配件,需等一个月才能修好;
2. 要求: 公司应尽快予以更换或退款。
注意: 1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
参考词汇: 配件 spare part
Dear Sir,
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Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir,
I am writing to you for the iPhone 7 I bought on 26th of March, 2017 at your shop. After I took it home and used it for a while, I found there was something wrong with it. I couldn’t go online with the phone, nor could I use video chat to communicate with my friends. Then I took it to your shop, only to be told that it was a new model and there were no right spare parts in the shop. And also the shop assistant told me it would take a month before the phone was repaired. So I was so desperate on hearing that. How can I wait that long? Therefore, I require that you change a new one for me or give my money back as soon as possible.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析：
本文是给你之前买了iPhone 7手机的店写一封投诉性，陈述手机的质量问题,要求该商店退换。文章给出了提纲，成文时应注意以下几点：(1)内容要点齐全。描述手机问题并提出要求。(2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态：一般过去时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。
【亮点说明】
1.使用高级句型：使用含有定语从句的句子I am writing to you for the iPhone 7 I bought on 26th of March, 2017 at your shop；否定词放句首的部分倒装nor could I use video chat to communicate with my friends.；不定式做意料之外的结果状语Then I took it to your shop, only to be told that it was a new model 2.使用了过渡词语：And also，Therefore等。3.使用了重要短语：communicate with和…交流；give back归还，恢复。
