题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假设你是李华,你的好朋友Mary ,是一名高三学生,在最近几次考试中成绩有所下降,她感到上好大学无望,不敢面对父母和老师。请你用英语给她写封信并给出你的建议。
1.对她的现状表示担忧; 2.心态很重要,自信是关键;
3.烦恼时找父母或老师寻求帮助; 4.改变学习方法。
注意:(1)词数100;(2)请适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头语已写好,不记入总词汇。
Dear Mary,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mary,
I’m sorry to know that you feel disappointed at your recent falling grades. What I want to tell you is that it is common for you Senior Three students to have an experience of depression.
Your attitude towards your grades has a great impact on your study. And confidence is key to success. So you should build up confidence in yourself. What’s more, whenever you have bad feelings or troubles, you can turn to your teachers and parents. In addition, it is very necessary to consider changing your learning approaches(strategies).
In conclusion, get rid of your pressure and work hard and you will achieve your goal.
Best Wishes!
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:考查提纲类作文。本文要求考生以李华的身份给好朋友Mary写信。Mary是一名高三学生,在最近几次考试中成绩有所下降,她感到上好大学无望,不敢面对父母和老师。李华用英语给她写封信并给出建议。所以本文使用第一人称以及一般现在时为主的时态。要点:1.对她的现状表示担忧;2.心态很重要,自信是关键;3.烦恼时找父母或老师寻求帮助;4.改变学习方法。提纲类作文最忌讳逐条翻译,要在上下文之间添加适当成分让行为更为流畅。建议文章分成两段,第一点为第一段,其余三点为第二段。