Question

【题目】假如你是某校高二学生李华。你的英国笔友Helen最近写信向你倾诉她的烦恼。得知她最近因学习压力大开始失眠，学习效率也降低后，你决定给她一些建议加以鼓励。请你根据以下要点提示用英文回信：

turn to your close friends for help...

keep a positive attitude...

take part in sports...

listen to music...

注意：1. 开头语和结束语己为你写好，不计入总词数；

2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；

3. 词数100左右。

Dear Helen,

I was very glad to receive your letter.

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Helen

I was very glad to receive your letter. At the same time I felt sad to hear that you were suffering in your studies. Here I’d like to share some advice with you on how to study efficiently.

Firstly you can talk with some close friends about your problems and ask them for help. This is an important way to deal with your problems directly. Secondly try to study in a positive way as this will decrease your pressure making studying an easy job. Thirdly spend time doing exercise which can not only build up our body but also refresh our mind. Lastly you can listen to your favorite music when possible. I really hope my advice can be of some benefit to you.

With best wishes.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】首先审题，这篇文章要求假如你是某校高二学生李华。你的英国笔友Helen最近写信向你倾诉她的烦恼。得知她最近因学习压力大开始失眠，学习效率也降低后，你决定给她一些建议加以鼓励。其次选用正确的人称和时态，用一般现在时、第一人称来写。然后写出单个句子，使用正确的连词，连句成段。具体来说，写这篇文章时，三段成文：第一段说明自己知道了她最近存在的问题；第二段详细说明自己的建议，并鼓励她；第三段美好的祝福。要注意文中给出的细节都要包括，不要遗漏。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的复合句。例如：使用了宾语从句At the same time I felt sad to hear that you were suffering in your studies.和定语从句Thirdly spend time doing exercise which can not only build up our body but also refresh our mind.