题目内容
11.假定你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津.你们学校和一所美国中学签署了教师交流协议.在过去的一年里,你们的英文老师是来自这所中学的Alice,不久前她返回美国任教.请你根据以下提示给Alice写封电子邮件.(1)对她表达感激之情;
(2)她离开后你自己及班里发生的事情;
(3)希望了解她的近况.
注意:
(1)短文词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)邮件中不能出现本人真实信息;
(4)开头和结尾己给出,不计入总词数.
Dear Alice,
How time flies!
Dear Alice,
How time flies!It has been more than one month since you returned to America.【高分句型一】How are you doing these days?And we miss you badly.(希望了解她的近况,表示思念)
I can well remember your soft voice,fluent English,patient teaching style.So we all appreciate your great help with our Enslish learning and cultural understanding.All the students have benefited a lot from your class and have made rapid progress.(表达感激之情)
After you left China,I ran for the president of the Students'Union and won the election eventually.As for the class,we have held various reading activities recommended by you,which aims to widen our horizons and improve our English.【高分句型二】(她离开后自己及班里发生的事情)
I'mlooking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
Yours,
Li Jin
分析 这是一封给外教的信.根据题目要求可知用第一人称,时态以一般现在时态为主.内容包括:一希望了解她的近况,表示思念;二表达感激之情;三她离开后自己及班里发生的事情.
高分句型:
1.It has been more than one month since you returned to America句子里.It 指时间,since表示"自从",引导时间状语从句,主句用现在完成时态;more than 表示"超过".
你已经回美国一个多月了.
2.As for the class,we have held various reading activities recommended by you,which aims to widen our horizons and improve our English.句子里As for 表示"关于";recommended by you做various reading activities 的定语;which 引导非限制性定语从句,代指主句;aims to 表示"目的是".
在班级里,为了拓宽我们的视野,提高我们的英语,我们已经举行了由你推荐的各种阅读活动.
解答 Dear Alice,
How time flies!It has been more than one month since you returned to America.【高分句型一】How are you doing these days?And we miss you badly.(希望了解她的近况,表示思念)
I can well remember your soft voice,fluent English,patient teaching style.So we all appreciate your great help with our Enslish learning and cultural understanding.All the students have benefited a lot from your class and have made rapid progress.(表达感激之情)
After you left China,I ran for the president of the Students'Union and won the election eventually.As for the class,we have held various reading activities recommended by you,which aims to widen our horizons and improve our English.【高分句型二】(她离开后自己及班里发生的事情)
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
点评 考查提纲类作文.
提纲类作文一般给出的要点比较多,这就要求考生在写作文时不用遗漏任何的要点,无论是汉语还是英文,都要在作文了有所体现,它们是阅卷老师关注的重点.此外如果要求有自我发挥,那么也一定要写出来.
| A. | have come | B. | has come | C. | having come | D. | coming |
| A. | decision | B. | effect | C. | promise | D. | difference |
| A. | expressions | B. | conditions | C. | experiences | D. | instructions |
●表示有意参加
●说明自己富有爱心、关爱动物
●打算为何种动物代言,并说明理由
●希望申请成功
Application Form (申请表)
| Name | Li Hua | Sex ( ) | F/M | Age ( ) | 18 |
| Email Add.(电子邮件地址) | lihua@xinhuaschool.com | ||||
| Statement of Application (申请陈述) | I am a student from Zhangzhou No.1Middle School in Fujian,China. | ||||
(2)词数120左右;
(3)"申请陈述"的第一句已经给出,不计入总词数.