[题目]假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号().并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用(＼)划掉.修改:在错的词下画一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词,2� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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【题目】假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

It is common for students to find part-time job．Last summer holiday, I had once worked as a waiter at a restaurant．At first I couldn’t stand the hard work．．But with time goes b[]y, I came to realize that I did the meaningful thing．First, I made some money, what allowed me to buy birthday gifts for my friends with asking my parents for money．But I began to learn about the value of money．Besides, I also learned how to get along with other．In a word, the part-time job at the restaurants was great and I got some valuably work experience from it．

【答案】

【1】在job前加 a

【2】把once前的had去掉

【3】goes改为 going

【4】将did后面的the改为a。

【5】what改为which

【6】friends后面的with改成without

【7】But改为And

【8】other改成others

【9】restaurants改成restaurant

【10】valuably改成valuable

【解析】

试题分析：

【1】由于job是可数名词，根据句意，它在文章中首次出现，故要用一个不定冠词a。

【2】分析句子，可知本句中有时间状语once，故本句应该用一般过去时。

【3】分析句子，可知这个一个状语，而且前面有介词with，故用go的现在分词形式。

【4】根据文意，可知此处应该写为did a good job（做得好）。

【5】分析句子结构与意思，可知这是一个非限制性定语从句，在从句中缺少主语，根据句意，可知先行词是前面整个句子的内容，故用关系代词which。

【6】根据对上下文的理解，可知本句的意思是这样可以让我不用问父母要钱而买礼物给朋友。故用without。

【7】分析句子，根据句意可知此处要用一个表转折的连词but。

【8】Others的意思是别人，other一般用在名词的前面，意思是“别的”。根据句意，故用others。

【9】根据句子，可知作者只在一家餐厅做兼职，故restaurant用单数形式。

【10】分析句子，可知valuably后的work是一个名词，故要用形容词修饰该名词，故改成valuable。

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