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要求：假设你是王林，作为一名交换生来到英国学习。经过一周的学习，请根据一下提示将你的见闻通过e-mail告诉你的父母。
（1）学校：校园比在中国就读的中学大3倍，绿树环绕；拥有现代化体育馆、艺术教室、实验室等。
（2）课程：选修的是物理、数学、化学和英语四门学科。
（3）老师：老师采用讨论式教学。
（4）同学：班级20人。女生9人，男生11人。
注意：1.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。                   2.100个词左右
提示词：laboratory（实验室）   gym(体育馆)   method(方法)
Dear Mam and Dad，
How are you？
One week has passed. I'm very fine here. Everything interests me very much.                
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
 
In a word, I'm very happy to be with them.
Yours,
Wang Lin.

Answer 1

One Possible Version
Dear Mam and Dad，
How are you？
One week has passed. I'm very fine here. Everything interests me very much.
Everything here is very different. The middle school is three times than the school in China. There are lots of trees around the school. And our has modern gym、art classroom、laboratory and so on.
I had chosen Physics、Math、Biology and English to learn. They are difficult, but it can't stop me to love them. I will study hard. The teacher's teach method is also different. Teacher usually makes us discuss in class,and everyone is very active.
In a word, I'm very happy to be with them.
Yours,
Wang Lin.

试题分析：本文是一篇书信作文。写作时首先要仔细审题，确定人称，时态，文体。内容要点要全面，上下段要使用连接词做到连贯。我们在写作中应当用尽可能少的形式表达尽可能多的语义内容，力求简洁精练。根据提示内容，写出所列要点，要全面。我们在用词上应该仔细揣摩，准确清晰地表达我们的思想，剔除冗词赘语，使文章言简意赅。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如：he middle school is three times than the school in China. it can't stop me to love them等。还运用了复合句They are difficult, but it can't stop me to love them.等。并注意了句子的衔接如：And，but，In a word等。
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