Question

最近你班举行了一场关于“动物园里圈养动物好不好”的讨论。假如你是李涛，请你根据下列提示，用英语将讨论的结果向English Weekly投稿。注意：字数120左右。
要求如下:
1. 赞成的理由；(至少3条理由)
2. 反对的理由；(至少3条理由)
3. 你的观点
Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we held on whether it is good or bad to keep animals in zoos.        

Answer 1

Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we held on whether it is good or bad to keep animals in zoos.Those who favor the idea think it provides chances for people to see wild animals. It might also develop people’s love for animals and nature. Besides, animals in zoos can be protected from dangers in the wild.
However, those who are against the idea thingk it is a waste of money and labor to keep animals in zoos. It’ll also damage the balance of nature. Animals will lose their freedom if caged in zoos.
I personally think it is  wrong to take animals away from their natural living areas and keeping them locked up.
Yours sincerely,
Li Tao

试题分析：本篇议论文，写作题材是对动物园里圈养动物好不好的两种不同观点。这种文章一般层次比较清晰，有总述；正方反方观点及自己观点。要注意的是1.在列举双方依据时要尽量使语言多样化；2.自我观点表达时要有正确的判断，要有辩证的思维。一篇文章需要有正确的句子才能明了清晰的表达作者的意思。考生应明白高考书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求的是将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确地表达意思的能力。考生应该用自己最熟悉、最有把握的词、短语及句式，按一定的逻辑顺序和意义层次完成短文，划分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之间的发展和连贯。尽量使用不同长度的句子，使句型多样化。适当使用连词，使句子间的衔接自然流畅。
【亮点说明】those who favor the idea think it provides chances for people to see wild animals.这句话有关who引导的定语从句， animals in zoos can be protected from dangers in the wild.这句话用了词组protect sb from sth，
those who are against the idea thingk it is a waste of money and labor to keep animals in zoos. 这句话用了it做形式主语， Animals will lose their freedom if caged in zoos.这句话用了条件状语从句的省略句， I personally think it is  wrong to take animals away from their natural living areas and keeping them locked up. 这句话用的是过去分词做宾语补足语，还有文章还使用了Besides, However,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。