Question

你们学校最近做了一项调查,调查的主题是”你寒假会去做兼职挣钱吗?”下面是调查结果:

结 果	原 因
89%选择不去	父母不允许 学习太忙,没时间 不知道自己能做什么工作
11%选择去	学以致用 积累社会经验 减轻父母的压力

请你就此用英文写一篇文章.
注意: 1.词数100左右;
2.可适当拓展内容以使行文连贯。
开头已经给出，但不计入总数。
Recently our school has carried out a survey about whether students will do some part-time job during the winter holiday.
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Answer 1

Recently our school has carried out a survey about whether students will do some part-time job during the winter holiday.
89% of the students said no. First, their parents won’t allow them to do so. Second, they are so busy with their studies during the holiday that they can’t afford the time to do it. Third, they are not sure what job they can do. 11% of the students planned to work during the winter holiday. They think working is a good chance to put what they have learned into practice. Through work, they can gain lots of social experience. In addition, by doing a part-time job to earn some money, they can reduce their parents’ pressure..

解析试题分析：这是一篇典型的议论文体的写作，它以表格的形式提出了论点（寒假兼职的优点和缺点）和论据，还以文字提示形式提出了话题（寒假是否会去做兼职赚钱）及需要考生自由发挥的部分（你的看法），自己的看法可选择上述中的任何一种，并就此发表个人的见解。本文的重点是表格中两种方式的优，缺点，根据题目的特点，以三段式的形式来写作比较好。根据内容，尽管讨论已经发生，但它是就一般的暑假假期计划而进行的讨论，没有特定的时间界定，因而考生应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。相当一部分考生用一般过去时进行论述，这会失掉较多的分数。从题目所给的开头可知应用第一人称来写。
【亮点说明】文章结构层次清楚，观点明确，语言表达准确，多用词组和句式： Allow sb. to do “允许某人做”，. they are so busy with their studies during the holiday that they can’t afford the time to do it. 这句话用了so…that…句型， they are not sure what job they can do. They think working is a good chance to put what they have learned into practice. 这两句话用了宾语从句还有范文还使用了 First, Second, Third, In addition,这些关联词使文章更加连贯。
考点:考查议论文写作