题目内容
16．近年来媒体不断报道一些商家为了获取商业利益而生产制造一些对人体有害的食品．请你以此为话题，给一家英文报刊写封信，谈谈你对食品安全的看法．信的内容应包括以下要点：1．食品安全问题屡次发生的原因．（ 利益、道德、法律等方面）
2．减少此类事件发生的措施．（ 对企业的法律监管，提高防范意识等）
要求：1．书写工整，卷面整洁；
2． 词数100个左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：food safety；producer
Dear sir，
I am writing to say something about food safety，which has caused great concern among the public．
There are some reasons for this problem．Firstly，some of the food producers just care about making money，ignoring its damage to people's health．（高分句型一）Secondly，we fail to recognize the importance of moral education．Thirdly，the lack of adequate laws on those illegal producers enforces the trend．
Safety measures should be taken to deal with the problem．On the one hand，more strict laws should be made to punish the illegal producers and the sellers who break the law．（高分句型二）On the other hand，consumers should avoid buying unsafe food．What's more，the government should strengthen management over the food quality．（高分句型三）
In a word，if everyone can make a difference，I firmly believe this problem will be solved in the near future．
Yours
Li Hua．
分析 题目要求以近年来媒体不断报道一些商家为了获取商业利益生产制造一些对人体有害的食品为话题，给一家英文报刊写封信，谈谈自己对食品安全的看法．信的内容应包括以下要点：1．食品安全问题屡次发生的原因．（利益、道德、法律等方面）2．减少此类事件发生的措施．（对企业的法律监管，提高防范意识等）要求有：1．书写工整，卷面整洁；2．词数不少于120个，开头和结尾都已给出，不计入总词数．提示词汇有：food safety；producer；行文中不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观；注意行文的连贯性．
亮点说明：
范文使用了一些重要的语法知识：宾语从句which has caused a great concern；非谓语动词ignoring its damage possible to people's health．语法知识使用得当，叙事清晰；
范文使用了很多连接词，如Firstly，Secondly，Thirdly，On the one hand，On the other hand，What's more等使作文更有条理，做到了行文连贯．
范文使用了很多固定短语：making money，the importance of，the lack of，take measures to do，deal with，break the law，in a word等，使作文内容更加充实；
范文使用了一些重要的语法知识：非谓语动词Feeling quite sorry for that，scattered in the rooms；宾语从句what to do to help；时间状语从句when my parents went out shopping；让步状语从句Tired as I was等．
解答 Dear sir，
I am writing to say something about food safety，which has caused great concern among the public．
There are some reasons for this problem．Firstly，some of the food producers just care about making money，ignoring its damage to people's health．（高分句型一）Secondly，we fail to recognize the importance of moral education．Thirdly，the lack of adequate laws on those illegal producers enforces the trend．
Safety measures should be taken to deal with the problem．On the one hand，more strict laws should be made to punish the illegal producers and the sellers who break the law．（高分句型二）On the other hand，consumers should avoid buying unsafe food．What's more，the government should strengthen management over the food quality．（高分句型三）
In a word，if everyone can make a difference，I firmly believe this problem will be solved in the near future．
Yours
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．
