Question

—个英文网站面向中学生征稿请你写一篇英语稿件，介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。
1. 写作要点：它是中国的传统节日之一；
2. 家人团聚；
3. 赏月、吃月饼；
4. 还有旅游、访友等其他活动。
注意：1.词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语已为你写好，不计人总词数。
参考词汇：中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar
赏月 enjoy the full moon         月饼 moon cake
The Mid-Autumn Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar.________________________________                        _
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Answer 1

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The Mid-Autumn Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home to attend the celebration. The moon that might looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories. In addition to the traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices such as traveling and visiting our relatives or friends.

解析试题分析：本文是一篇提纲作文。写作时首先要仔细审题，确定人称，时态，文体。内容要点要全面，上下段要使用连接词做到连贯。我们在写作中应当用尽可能少的形式表达尽可能多的语义内容，力求简洁精练。根据提示内容，写出所列要点，要全面。我们在用词上应该仔细揣摩，准确清晰地表达我们的思想，剔除冗词赘语，使文章言简意赅。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如：no matter how far away or how busy we are, As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. 等。还运用了主语从句What we love most，和定语从句the time we enjoy the full moon together. 等。并注意了句子的衔接如：Usually,With the beautiful moon up in the sky,  In addition to等。
考点：提纲作文。