Question

【题目】假定英语课,老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^),并在其下面写出该加的词.

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

During the recent harvest festival, my parents and I visited the Pear Village , where was a great destination for photographers. The plot was filled with green pear trees and many kinds of flowers. The three of them were very excited. On arriving here，we were warmly welcome by the local people. Then, we picked pears, had a picnic and shared photos took in and around the orchards (果园）. After that，we talked with the working farmers happily. They were simply and kind. They said the harvests benefited all the residents, so they recently hosted at the festival. They were looking forward to welcoming more visitor to their village. The time passes quickly. We were lost in enjoying ourselves before we realized we had to say goodbye to the villagers. It was really unforgettable visit.

Answer 1

【答案】1. where→which

2. them→us

3.heret→here

4.welcome→welcomed

5.took→taken

6.simply→simple

7.删掉at

8.visitor→visitors

9.passes→passed

10.unforgettable前加冠词an

【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了我和父母去参加收获节的故事。

1.考查定语从句。分析句子可知，本句为带有非限制性定语从句的复合句，其中my parents and I visited the Pear Village为主句，句中the Pear Village为先行词，在其后的定语从句中作主语，根据定语从句关系代词的用法，先行词指物，在从句中作主语时，关系代词用which ，that不能引导非限制性定语从句。故where改为which。

2.考查代词。结合上文可知，我和父母一起去the Pear Village，所以，此处表示我们三人都非常兴奋。所以them改为us。

3.考查副词。句意：一到那里，我们就受到当地人热烈的欢迎。结合句意，此处要用副词there，表示the Pear Village，故here改为there。

4.考查被动语态。句意同上。根据句意，我们是被欢迎，所以语态用被动语态，动词要用过去分词。故welcome改为welcomed。

5.考查非谓语动词。句意：之后，我们摘了梨，野餐，分享了在果园里和周围拍的照片。take photos拍照片，本句中，share为谓语动词，所以take为非谓语动词，因为photos和take为动宾关系，take要用过去分词作定语，表示被动含义。故took改为taken。

6.考查形容词。句意：他们简朴而善良。分析句子可知，本句为主系表结构，所以表语要用形容词。故simply改为simple。

7.考查介词。本句中host the festival举办节日，节日前不用介词。故删去at。

8.考查名词。visitor游客，可数名词。句中提到更多的游客，所以visitor要用复数。故visitor改为visitors。

9.考查时态。结合全文，讲述我和父母去参加收获节，表示过去的事实，所以时态要用一般过去时。故passes改为passed。

10.考查冠词。句意：那真是一次难忘的拜访。泛指“一次难忘的拜访”。unforgettable为元音音素开头，所以前面要用不定冠词an。故unforgettable前加冠词an。