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4.假定你是李华,你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会.请你写信邀请外教Susan参加,要点包括:
1.时间:周五晚8点至9点2.地点:学生俱乐部
3.内容:生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等4.要求:备小礼物意:
1.词数100左右,开头语已为你写好;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.答案必须写在答题卡相应的位置上.
Dear Susan,
We're throwing a surprise party for Xiao Ming's birthday.
      .
Yours.

分析 假定你是李华,你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会.请你写信邀请外教Susan参加,要点包括:1.时间:周五晚8点至9点2.地点:学生俱乐部3.内容:生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等4.要求:备小礼物意.写作时不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系.根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩.注意:1.词数100左右,开头语已为你写好;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.答案必须写在答题卡相应的位置上.
【亮点说明】We want to give him a surprise,so please keep quiet about it.句中使用并列句;When he comes,we'll light the candles and sing"Happy Birthday"together for him.时间状语从句运用得恰到好处;It'll be nice to see how excited he will be.句中运用动词不定式作真正主语,并和how引导的宾语从句结合在一起;I'm sure you'll have a good time at the party,too.省略that的宾语从句在句中展现.
We want to give him a surprise,so please keep quiet about it.(高分句型一)
When he comes,we'll light the candles and sing"Happy Birthday"together for him.(高分句型二)
It'll be nice to see how excited he will be.(高分句型三)

解答 Dear Susan,
      We're throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming's birthday.We'd like to invite you to the party.We want to give him a surprise,so please keep quiet about it.(高分句型一)We'll gather at the Students'Club at 8 pm this Friday,after the evening classes.And it's going to last about an hour.We each will prepare a little present.When he comes,we'll light the candles and sing"Happy Birthday"together for him.(高分句型二)Then the cake will be cut and we'll sing songs and play games.It'll be nice to see how excited he will be.(高分句型三)I'm sure you'll have a good time at the party,too.
                                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours,
                                                                                                                                                                                                 Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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