题目内容
假如一家英语报社在征集有关未来生活变化的文章,现请你以“What Will Our Life Be in the Future?” 为标题用英语写一篇短文,词数不少于100,内容包括:
生活:足不出户就可购物、读书、就医等;
旅游:去月球、火星(Mars)等观光;
环境:利用太阳能,一个整洁的世界;
健康:锻炼身体,克服一切疾病。
注意:(1)标题已为你写好(不计入总词数);
(2)为使文章连贯,可适当增减内容。
What Will Our Life Be in the Future?
What Will Our Life Be in the Future?
With the rapid development of hi-tech, great changes will take place in every way in the future.
We completely live in the cyberspace where we don’t need to go out to buy things, to go to the library to read books, to see a doctor in the hospital, and so on. To our joy, it’s very easy for us to visit the moon and the Mars. And our world will be a tidy and green world because the energy we use is all from the sun. What’s more, any illness can be cured and many people can live a longer time with a healthy body.
All these can be true, I think, through our efforts.
【解析】
试题分析:考查提纲类书面表达:这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,本篇作文多采取将来时态,适当时候运用被动语态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮点说明】
定语从句的使用,先行词为cyberspace,在从句中做地点状语
We completely live in the cyberspace where we don’t need to go out to buy things, to go to the library to read books, to see a doctor in the hospital, and so on.
To one’s +名词结构以及句型It is +adj+for sb to do sth
To our joy, it’s very easy for us to visit the moon and the Mars
过渡的短语What’s more而且,表递进
What’s more, any illness can be cured
插入语sb think的使用,使句式多样化
All these can be true, I think, through our efforts.
考点: 提纲类作文