Question

【题目】假设你是李华，你认为我们周围的环境污染越来越严重。作为一名中学生，我们应该节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起，做一个“低碳生活”的中学生。请你根据以下要点写一封信，建议并号召全校同学过“低碳生活”。

1.陈述理由：为什么要过“低碳生活”？

2.如何过“低碳生活”？提出至少三条建议。

3.号召更多的同学加入到“低碳生活”中来。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

提示：低碳 low-carbon

Dear fellow students,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Today,the problem of environment has been more and more serious.As living a low-carbon life is a good way to reduce emissions of greenhouse gases,I am writing to suggest that we might as well protect the environment in the following ways.

To begin with,I shall only turn on the lights when necessary and keep the refrigerator and air conditioners working in the low-carbon mode to save energy.Additionally,the bus or bicycle will be my first choice.Last but not least,not only will I limit the use of plastic bags when I am shopping,but also I will separate my rubbish into non-recyclable and recyclable waste whenever it is possible.

I hope that more and more schoolmates will participate in the activity.

【解析】这是一篇建议信类的作文。作文内容要点已经给出，考生在写这篇作文时应注意以下几点：1.通篇以一般现在时为主。2.给出的要点要齐全，但不能只是进行简单的罗列，要增加细节，使全文连贯自然。3.在写建议时要逐条写，切忌乱写一通。

【范文亮点】：

文章使用“to begin with 首先”“additionally 另外”“last but not least最后但并不是最不重要的 ”等连接词，使行文更加流畅。文章采用了I will separate my rubbish into non-recyclable and recyclable waste whenever it is possible.

“I am writing to 我写信是为了.......”“not only....but also...不但...而且...”“the problem of ......的问题”等高分句式。

3.I shall only turn on the lights when necessary and keep the refrigerator and air conditioners working in the low-carbon mode to save energy. when 引导的时间状语从句省略形式。 I will separate my rubbish into non-recyclable and recyclable waste I will separate my rubbish into non-recyclable and recyclable waste whenever it is possible. Whenever引导的时间状语从句。