Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你从市博物馆网站得知博物馆正在招募兼职英语讲解员(interpreter)。请你根据以下提示，给博物馆负责人Mr.Liu写一封英文自荐信：

1.英语水平；

2.历史知识；

3.其他优势。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mr.Liu,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr.Liu,

I'm Li Hua,a high school student in our city.I've learned from the website that you're looking for a part-time English interpreter.I'm writing to apply for the position.

First of all,I have a good command of English and I can communicate with foreigners in English fluently. Secondly,I'm quite familiar with the history and traditions of our city since grew up here.Thirdly,as a kind,brave and outgoing girl,I can get along well with different people and make friends with them easily.I'm sure visitors will be satisfied with my service.

I'd appreciate it if you could offer me the job.Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇命题作文。要求写自荐信，文章内容要点已经给出。考生在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：1. 通篇以一般现在时为主。2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。3. 注意文章要以书信的形式进行叙述，一定要通过简单的例子作为支撑。否则会显得说服力不够，内容不够丰满。

【范文亮点】

1，.I've learned from the website that you're looking for a part-time English interpreter.宾语从句。

2，First of all，Secondly，Thirdly这些连词的使用，使文章层次分明，行文流畅。

3，I'd appreciate it if you could offer me the job.虚拟语气的使用

4，learned from ，apply fo，look for，have a good command of 对......有很好的掌握， be familiar with对......熟悉等高频词组的运用给文章增彩。