题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假定你是李华,看到班上有部分同学在做作业时,不自己独立完成而是抄袭他人的作业,针对这种现象,请你以My Opinion on Copying Others' Homework为题谈谈你自己的看法。
注意:1.短文必须包括下面表格中的所有内容要点,可适当发挥。
2.短文标题与开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
3.词数120左右。
主要原因 | 作业量大,偏难 |
对功课不感兴趣,懒隋 | |
完成任务,取悦老师 | |
危害及解决办法 | 抄袭不对,违反校规 |
要诚实,勤奋学习 | |
有困难可请教同学和老师 | |
个人看法 | …… |
My Opinion on Copying Others' Homework
It is known to us all that some students copy others' homework ................................................
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【答案】
It is known to us all that some students copy others' homework. As we know, some students copy others' homework for some reasons.
On the one hand, we students have to do masses of homework both at home and at school. Sometimes we do have some problems which are too hard to work out. On the other hand, some students are too lazy to finish their homework. In order to please their parents and teachers, they form the habit of copying others’ homework.
Personally, I think copying others’ homework is a bad habit. For one thing, it is against the school rules. Being students, we should be honest and work hard. If we have difficulties, we can turn to our teachers and classmates for help. For another, copying others’ homework too often, we will lose the ability to think.
【解析】
试题分析:假定你是李华,看到班上有部分同学在做作业时,不自己独立完成而是抄袭他人的作业,针对这种现象,请你以My Opinion on Copying Others' Homework为题谈谈你自己的看法。主要原因:作业量大,偏难;对功课不感兴趣,懒隋;完成任务,取悦老师;抄袭不对,违反校规。办法:;要诚实,勤奋学习;有困难可请教同学和老师。源:学写作时不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意:1.短文必须包括下面表格中的所有内容要点,可适当发挥。2.短文标题与开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。3.词数120左右。
【亮点说明】It is known to us all that some students copy others' homework.主句从句在句中出现;As we know, some students copy others' homework for some reasons. As引导非限制性定语从句;Sometimes we do have some problems which are too hard to work out.强调谓语和定语从句完美结合;In order to please their parents and teachers, they form the habit of copying others’ homework.动词不定式在句中作目的状语;Personally, I think copying others’ homework is a bad habit.句中使用了宾语从句;Being students, we should be honest and work hard.现在分词作状语很是巧妙;If we have difficulties, we can turn to our teachers and classmates for help. If引导的砖语从句出现在句中;copying others’ homework too often, we will lose the ability to think.现在分词再次作状语,把文章推向了高潮;另外,On the one hand, On the other hand, Personally, For one thing, For another,的使用为文章增光添彩。