Question

国际文化交流中心将组织一次各国学生参加的“和平、友谊” 夏令营活动，要求报名者提
交英文个人简历。假如你是王珊，请根据下列信息写一篇个人简历。
姓名：王珊    性别：女
年龄：16岁    学校：北京阳光中学
其他：爱好音乐、摄影；善于与人交流，乐于助人；热爱自然，热爱和平
参加夏令营目的：结交朋友，了解外国文化。
My name is Wang Shan.
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Answer 1

My name is Wang Shan. I’m a 16-year-old girl studying in Beijing Yangguang
Middle School. I like music, especially classical music. I’m also interested in
photography because it allows me to record the beautiful moments in my life.
I’m good at communicating with others and always ready to help other
people. Furthermore, I love nature. Whenever I’m free, I’ll travel to beautiful natural attractions to experience natural wonders with my family. In addition, I love peace, and
I hope all nations in the world can live in a peaceful environment and lead a happy life.
The purpose of my intending to join the Peace and Friendship Summer Camp is to make more friends from foreign countries, and to have an access to the insight of foreign
cultures. I hope I can do something for the world peace. I’m sure I’ll be learning a lot from the Summer Camp.

试题分析：本文属于提纲类作文，1.本文主题引入自然，而且把学生学校生活与社会生活紧密结合在一起。2.要求明确，整体难度适中。3.本文写作注意以下几点:  A.要求写一篇简历，注意结构和语言上的特点。B.注意表中“其它”和“目的”两项应该是重点要表达到位的内容。文字提示里所出了要点，考生可以翻译，并且做适当的发挥，在写作的过程中，一定要注意使用合适的连接词来连接全文，让文章成为一个整体。同时注意使用高级词汇和高级句型提升问的文采和层次。
点评：提纲类作文最重要的是要把所有的要点都包括在内，不能有遗漏或省略。本文所给要点很全，不需要考生做较多的发挥，在写作时，注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，让文章更有文采。