Question

【题目】书面表达

假定你是李华，你的网友Susan写信给你，想要了解中国的传统节日。请根据写作提纲给她回信，介绍你最喜欢的传统节日——春节。

内容包括：1. 春节的重要性；

2. 主要庆祝活动和风俗习惯；

3. 邀请她来中国体验春节。

注意：字数100字左右。

参考词汇：对联couplet 压岁钱lucky money

Dear Susan,

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Susan,

I am glad to receive your last letter and tell you about one of our most important traditional Chinese festivals－Spring Festival. It is also called Chinese New Year, which is a great occasion to the Chinese people because it’s an important time for the whole family and relatives to unite and good friends to get together. It also helps us Chinese to remember our traditional culture by various celebrations and activities.

Chinese New Year lasts fifteen days, during which we clean up our houses and put up “Fu” and red couplets to welcome the new year. The parks and squares are decorated with red lanterns, balloons and flowers and Dragon dances are played in the street. They all bring a festive atmosphere to the city. As for us children, we can get a lot of lucky money from our parents and relatives, so it’s the happiest time for us.

I think you must be attracted by so many colorful celebrations and activities above. I am looking forward to your coming to China and experiencing our Spring Festival with me.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：假定你是李华，你的网友Susan写信给你，想要了解中国的传统节日。请根据写作提纲给她回信，介绍你最喜欢的传统节日——春节。内容包括：1. 春节的重要性；2. 主要庆祝活动和风俗习惯；

3. 邀请她来中国体验春节。这是一篇明显的提纲作文，就是把文章的情景和内容要求分成块，以条目的形式列出以进行写作。考生在审题的时候应该注意审要求、审文体、审人称、审时态。题文已经告知要求，那么文体应为书信文体，即介绍主要行程；又根据“你是李华” 写作时即用第一人称“我”，即李华；时态主要用一般现在时即可或一般将来时。考生在写作时应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来。表达时应该综合运用所掌握的知识，避开生僻的词汇，并克服母语的干扰，按照英语的习惯方式，用地道的英语表达出来，力求做到语言准确无误。然后根据要点选词组句，然后按照篇章结构连句成篇。

【亮点说明】本文语言凝练，论点鲜明，条理层次清晰。文章第一段就开门见山介绍中国的春节；第二段继续介绍春节的一些习惯；第三段要求对方来中国过春节。文章使用了which引导的定语从句which is a great occasion to the Chinese people because it’s an important time for the whole family and relatives to unite and good friends to get together（这是对于中国人来说非常重要的场合，因为它整个家庭和亲戚团员和好朋友聚会的一段重要时光）和during which we clean up our houses and put up “Fu” and red couplets to welcome the new year（在春节期间，我们打扫房间和张贴“福”字和红对联以迎新年）。高级词汇和短语：as for至于，festive atmosphere节日气氛。最后一句使用I am looking forward to your coming to China and experiencing our Spring Festival with me期待你来中国和我以前过春节，给文章一个完美的结束。