Question

【题目】假设你是李华，正在英国伦敦参加夏令营。请给在该市的网友Jack写一封电子邮件，说明你想与他见面，并去参观他的学校。同时告诉他，你准备了中国结作为礼物赠送给他，感谢他在网上解答你在英语学习上的问题。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 参考词汇：中国结：Chinese knot

Dear Jack,

___________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jack,

How are you doing these days?

I’m writing this letter to tell you I’m at a summer camp in London now, and I think it’s a good chance for us to meet and have a talk. You know, I always want to know what your school is like and I’m also very curious about your school life. If convenient, it will be great to visit your school during my stay in London.

By the way, I bring a small gift for you, which is a fine Chinese knot. I really thank you for your patient and clear explanation of my questions on English learning before.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本题考查提纲类作文。首先要认真审题，假设你是李华，正在英国伦敦参加夏令营。请给在该市的网友Jack写一封电子邮件，说明你想与他见面，并去参观他的学校。同时告诉他，你准备了中国结作为礼物赠送给他，感谢他在网上解答你在英语学习上的问题。其次要确定时态，表示主语现在的状态，所以这篇文章要使用一般现在时。然后要确定文章的结构，按照题目所给内容逐条翻译即可。在写作过程中，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合题目所给出的信息，不要出现偏题问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有文采。正确使用写信的格式，词数控制在一百词左右。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些高级句型。例如I’m writing this letter to tell you I’m at a summer camp in London now,这里含有一个宾语从句。I always want to know what your school is like and I’m also very curious about your school life. 这里含有一个宾语从句。By the way, I bring a small gift for you, which is a fine Chinese knot. 这里含有一个非限制性定语从句。