Question

【题目】书面表达

请用英语为China Daily写一篇关于保护野生动物的短文。内容应包含：

1．许多野生动物濒临灭绝，保护野生动物势在必行。

2．分析造成野生动物濒临灭绝的原因，如：森林遭到破坏，环境被污染，人类大量捕杀等。

3．至少提出两条保护野生动植物的措施。

注意：不要逐条翻译，词数100词左右。

参考词汇：野生动物wildlife；灭绝die out；措施 measure

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear editor,

As we know, the number of wild animal is becoming smaller and smaller. Some of them are even dying out. The reasons are as follows:

To start with, people have been cutting down tress for building, causing some animals to lose their habitats. Besides, farmers use too much pesticide, which endangers the lives of some animals. In addition, to make money, some people have been killing rare wild animals.

In my opinion, it’s time we took immediate measures to change the situation. We shouldn’t cut down trees without permission. Instead, we are supposed to plant more trees to protect the animals’ living conditions. At the same time, more nature reserves are expected to be set up. I believe as long as we take action immediately, we will live in harmony with animals and life will become better.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题：写一篇关于保护野生动物的短文，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮点说明】文章使用了很好的短语和句子：As we know众所周知，dying out濒临死亡，cut down减少，In my opinion在我看来，are supposed to应该，set up建立，in harmony with和谐相处，which endangers the lives of some animals定语从句，文章使用了To start with，Besides，In addition等使文章条理性更强。