Question

【题目】假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Terry要来北京一所高中任教，请你介绍城市交通情况，以便来时出行，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：

1. 交通工具（出租车、地铁、公交等）；

2. 比较利弊。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Terry,

I’m glad that you will come to work in our country. There are many means of transportation in Beijing for you to go about. You can take a taxi, which is available 24 hours a day. It is fast, comfortable, and convenient, but it is expensive. If you don’t go in a hurry, you can take the underground or buses, which are cheap. The disadvantage is that they are usually crowded, especially during the rush hour. If you want to go sightseeing, you can take a special bus. Its upper story has a good view and it passes most famous places of interest.

Looking forward to seeing you soon!

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

这是一篇提纲类作文，主要是给美国朋友Terry写一封邮件，介绍城市交通情况，以便来时出行。内容包括：1. 交通工具（出租车、地铁、公交等）；2. 比较利弊。我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如go about，take a taxi，in a hurry，go sightseeing，places of interest，look forward to；还运用句型：You can take a taxi, which is available 24 hours a day. 和If you don’t go in a hurry, you can take the underground or buses, which are cheap.这两句运用了非限定性定语从句；The disadvantage is that they are usually crowded, especially during the rush hour.这句话运用了表语从句等。并注意了句子的衔接如but，if，and等等。