题目内容
【题目】假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,用英语写一篇日记,记述你周日在小区里扫雪的过程。词数不少于60。
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Sunday, January 12 Snowy
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【答案】Sunday, January12 Snowy
This morning, when I looked out of the window, I excitedly found it was snowing heavily. Attracted by the beautiful sight, I couldn’t wait to go outside with my camera. As I was walking on the path in front of our building, I saw a boy suddenly slip on the snow-covered ground. I walked up and helped him out. Luckily, he was not injured. It was at that moment that I realized what I should do. Immediately, I ran back home to get a broom and started to sweep the path. I worked so hard that I sweated a lot. An hour later, the thick snow was cleared away. Looking at the clean path, my neighbors all smiled and gave me thumbs up.
I felt very happy that I did something for my neighborhood.
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一篇日记。按照四幅图的先后顺序,记述周日在小区里扫雪的过程。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
人称:第一人称
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般过去时。
要求:
1. 发现下雪
2.看见有人摔倒
3.扫雪的过程
4.描述自己的心情
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
look out of;couldn’t/can’t wait to do sth.;go outside;in front of;snow-covered;on the ground;walk up;at that moment;worked hard;clear away;thumbs up;start to do sth.等
第三步:连词成句
1. When I looked out of the window, I excitedly found it was snowing heavily.
2. Attracted by the beautiful sight, I couldn’t wait to go outside with my camera.
3. As I was walking on the path in front of our building, I saw a boy suddenly slip on the snow-covered ground.
4. It was at that moment that I realized what I should do.
5. Immediately, I ran back home to get a broom and started to sweep the path. I worked so hard that I sweated a lot.
6. Looking at the clean path, my neighbors all smiled and gave me thumbs up.
7. I felt very happy that I did something for my neighborhood.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词):as;and;when;so…that…等
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改