[题目]短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1．每处错误及其修� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Music is the universal language to all human beings, it plays a very important part in our life. It can make us life more colourfully and help us to relax ourselves. Without music, our world would be as a wild desert.

There are different variety of music, such as popular music, classical music, country music, jazz music, rap music, but rock music.

Of all the music, I like popular music better. For the one thing, with beautiful melody, it is pleasant to hear; for another, most popular music deals the topics of love and friendship, which appeals to us young people.

【答案】

【1】第一句 it---which

【2】第二句 us---our

【3】第二句 colourfully---colourful

【4】第三句 as---like

【5】第四句 variety---varieties

【6】第四句 but---and

【7】第五句 better-- best

【8】第六句 for one thing

【9】第七句在deal后加with

【10】第七句 appeals---appeal

【解析】

【1】第一句 it---which 考查关系代词的用法。前面用逗号说明后面要用从句，故应用which变成一个非限制性定语从句，which指代上文中提及的事。

【2】第二句 us---our 考查物主代词的用法。在这里life前要用物主代词our，不能用人称代词的宾格us。故将us改为our。

【3】第二句 colourfully---colourful 考查形容词的用法。make sth + adj. 表示“使……怎么样”的意思。

【4】第三句 as---like 考查介词的用法。be like 是“像……一样”，而as 后面指的是做什么人或物。

【5】第四句 variety---varieties 考查名词复数的用法。此处前面用了There are different，故variety应该用复数，即：varieties.

【6】第四句 but---and 此处的连词应该是并列关系而不是转折关系，故改为and。

【7】第五句 better-- best 考查形容词最高级的用法，前面用了Of all the music，限定了范围，故后面要表示的是我最喜欢的，所以要把better改为best。

【8】第六句 for one thing首先，是固定搭配。此处the多余，故去掉the。

【9】第七句在deal后加with，deal是不及物动词，和with连用可跟宾语。

【10】第七句 appeals---appeal。因为which在这里指代前面的the topics，故which后的动词用复数形式，所以appeal要用原形。

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