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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Failure comes to us now and then.I suffered painful failure in the exam hold the other day,and it helped me find a new self.Before the exam,I had promised my parents that I will get the best marks in all my subjects.However,I took everything for granted,ignoring my teachers’ advice or paying little attention to my homework.Therefore,I failed two of my favorite subjects,math and physics,what surprised everyone include myself.Looking at back,I realized that it was our overconfidence that led to the failure.Only if we are modest and work hard will we are able to have the chance to achieve our goal.

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【解析】第一处:考察冠词。句意:我在前天的考试中遭受了一次痛苦的失败。这里没有特指是哪个“failure”,所以应加上不定冠词a.

第二处:考察非谓语动词。held the other day为过去分词做后置定语,修饰the exam,表示“前天举行的考试”。因为the examhold之间为动宾关系,所以用hold的过去分词形式做后置定语。故将hold改为held.

第三处:考察时态。根据前文I had promised my parents 可知时态为一般过去时故将will改为would.

第四处:考察连词。句意:我认为所有事情都是理所当然的,忽视了老师的建议,也没有在意家庭作业。分析可知ignoring my teachers’ advicepaying little attention to my homework表示作者做的两件事,为并列关系。句子为肯定句,故将or改为and.

第五处:考察非限制性定语从句。分析可知which surprised everyone including myself为非限制性定语从句,故将what改为which.

第六处:考察非谓语动词。including sth.=sth. included,表示“包括某物”,通常在句子中充当非谓语做状语。结合语境,“包括我自己”应表达为“including myself”,故将include改为including。

第七处:考察介词。句意:再回首,我才意识到正是我的过度自信导致了失败。look at表示“看着某物”,look back表示“往后看,回首”。根据语境可知要将at去掉。

第八处:考察代词。根据语境可知作者要表达的是“是我的过度自信导致了失败”,故将our改为my。

第九处:考察动词。Only if we are modest and work hard will we be able to have the chance to achieve our goals为部分倒装句。句中情态动词will提到主语we之前,谓语动词应采用动词原形的形式。故将are还原为be。

第十处:考察单复数。句意:只有谦虚和努力学习,我们才有机会实现我们的目标。分析可知 “our goal”应该不止一个,故将goal改为复数形式goals。

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Patrick and Rachel Hugens have biked around the world. The Hugenses, who live in Boise when not on their bikes, are 25 months into their latest round-the-world adventure, scheduled to end in March. They've visited 36 countries on this tour, touching Europe, Africa, Asia and South America. “Traveling by bike is the greatest freedom," Rachel said via email. “You can see people's daily lives and can communicate with them.”

Rachel warns, “Cycle touring can become addictive.” Bike tourism is on the rise in the United States and around the world, according to the Adventure Cycling Association. The U. S. Bicycle Route System has grown 66 percent in the past two years and now has a presence in 24 states, including Idaho, and the District of Columbia.

Dennis Swiftsecretary of the Southwest Idaho Mountain Biking Association, rode across the U.S. last year- from Seattle to Salem, Mass. Six people started the tour and three finished, riding 52 out of 56 days. They averaged about 60 miles per riding day. Swift also rode through the Basque Country with a group of Boise cyclists last year. He's planning to participate in a Virginia bike tour this year. “When you get older, your health is most important,” he said. “My mom had Alzheimer's disease. They say what's good for health is good for the brain, so riding is one thing to be first in my life.”

This is the third time that the couple have quit their jobs to tour. Rachel is a nurse; Patrick is an architect. Both regained their former jobs when they returned home in 2000 and 2007. They're uncertain what will happen this time. They've given themselves a chance to save extra money by going to work by bike and avoiding some bills that are basic for most ( cell phones, cable TV).“Traveling changes your view of money and what it can do for you,” Rachel said. “We've met some cyclists traveling long term. They have many reasons to spend wisely.”

“The fellow cyclists we meet mostly come from Britain, Germany, Spain, Holland, Australia or New Zealand," Rachel said, “It is so nice to see that people all over the world are friendly and welcoming.”

1How many countries have the Hugenses visited on their latest tour? (不多于2个单词)

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2Why does Dennis Swift ride bikes? (不多于2个单词)

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3How do the Hugenses save extra money for their bike tours? (不多于10个单词)

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4What is the passage mainly about? (不多于3个单词)

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Attractions

Do you:

Love the National Park, value it and hope to safeguard its future?

Wish to see the beautiful landscape of the Park protected?

Like to enjoy peaceful informal recreation within the Park?

Aims

The Friends organization aims are to help protect and improve the Pembrokeshire Coast National Park for all to enjoy. We are a voluntary organization and registered charity without financial links to the National Park Authority.

Activities

We encourage everyone to enjoy the National Park through regular talks and visits to interesting places in the Park with expert guides.

We keep an eye on planning applications. Park Authority policies and threats to the National Park such as massive leisure complexes. We work with like-minded organizations such as the Campaign for National Parks to make our voice more effective.

We help children to understand the National Park by sponsoring publications such as an adventure booklet and projects in local schools.

Benefits

Guided visits to places of interest which may not always be available to the general public.

All members receive our regular News and Views.

Talks by experts in their fields on current issues.

A discount is available on Friends items for sale.

Satisfaction of participation in work parties, for those willing and able to be involved.

If interested, please complete the Application Form at www.fpnp.org.uk

Attractions

Do you:

Love the National Park, value it and hope to safeguard its future?

Wish to see the beautiful landscape of the Park protected?

Like to enjoy peaceful informal recreation within the Park?

Aims

The Friends organization aims are to help protect and improve the Pembrokeshire Coast National Park for all to enjoy. We are a voluntary organization and registered charity without financial links to the National Park Authority.

Activities

We encourage everyone to enjoy the National Park through regular talks and visits to interesting places in the Park with expert guides.

We keep an eye on planning applications. Park Authority policies and threats to the National Park such as massive leisure complexes. We work with like-minded organizations such as the Campaign for National Parks to make our voice more effective.

We help children to understand the National Park by sponsoring publications such as an adventure booklet and projects in local schools.

Benefits

Guided visits to places of interest which may not always be available to the general public.

All members receive our regular News and Views.

Talks by experts in their fields on current issues.

A discount is available on Friends items for sale.

Satisfaction of participation in work parties, for those willing and able to be involved.

If interested, please complete the Application Form at www.fpnp.org.uk

1Which of the following is discouraged by the Friends organization?

A. To build massive complexes for public amusement.

B. To prevent possible damages to the National Park.

C. To help protect and improve the Park for all to enjoy.

D. To sponsor publications and projects in local school.

2One of the benefits for members of Friends is to ________.

A. have Friends' goods free of charge

B. visit any place not open to the public

C. take part in work parties if they want to

D. give talks in their fields on current issues

3The purpose of this poster is to invite more people to ________.

A. raise money for the Friends organization

B. join the Friends organization and be members of it

C. work as managers for Pembroke shire National Park

D. enjoy the landscape of Pembroke shire National Park

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