[题目]Teenagers杂志Conversation With Brad栏目的负责人Brad收到了李华的一封来信.仔细阅读下面的来信.帮助Brad用英语写一封回信, 给出分析并提出合理建议.回信应包括以下要点:1．定期与父母交流.2．尽量避免与他们争执.3．其他你认为可行的途径.Dear Brad, I’m a student from Xinh 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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【题目】Teenagers杂志Conversation With Brad栏目的负责人Brad收到了李华的一封来信。仔细阅读下面的来信，帮助Brad用英语写一封回信, 给出分析并提出合理建议。回信应包括以下要点：

1．定期与父母交流。2．尽量避免与他们争执。3．其他你认为可行的途径。

Dear Brad,

I’m a student from Xinhua Senior High School. I have some difficulty communicating with my parents. Although I have tried my best, I find it really difficult to make them satisfied……So I feel lonely sometimes. I would be grateful if you could give me some advice.

Yours,

Li Hua

注意：1.可适当增加细节。2.词数：120左右。

Dear Li Hua,

I feel greatly honored to be trusted with your personal affairs.

___________________________________________________________________________

【答案】

【解析】

本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封回信；Teenagers杂志Conversation With Brad栏目的负责人Brad收到了李华的一封来信，信中说自己和父母交流有困难，请你帮助Brad用英语写一封回信, 给出分析并提出合理建议。回信应包括以下要点:1.定期与父母交流。2.尽量避免与他们争执。3.其他你认为可行的途径。时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：communicate（交流），avoid（避免），argument（争执），the generation gap（代沟），natural（自然的），expectation（期望），satisfied（满意的）及respect（尊重）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。

本文内容完整，层次分明，结构紧凑，表达准确。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

This morning, I, together with my parents, go to the second-hand book market near my home. There were so much people that we had to push their way through the crowd. Though the market was terribly noisy, but we felt quite pleasing to be able to pick up a really good bargain. Just as we were ready leave, however, a heavy rain began to pour down. Instead of seek shelter, my parents suggested we help a couple of stall owner pack their books. Under our help, all the books were free from the rain. Our timely help was great appreciated.

增加；在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Mr. Cousins,

Since you are a well-known musician, I’m writing this e-mail to ask you for some advices on how to form a band.

I, together by two boys and two girls from different classes in our school, wanted to form a band. We are all fond of pop music and modern dance, but they still have many problems to solve. I’d like to know that we should play one kind of music or different style to start with. And is it enough to practice only at weekends? Why can we get more chances to perform? In addition, we’d appreciate if you would be come up with a name for our band.

Thanks to your considering our above questions, Mr. Cousins. I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

For many people, music has always been part of life, and they listen to music on radio, on iPod and on Internet. As is vividly showing in the picture, the music fan is trying to download songs he enjoys. But the website requires payment first every time he wanted to download something, that annoys him. How he wishes the music is all free!

Many people are used to free music being downloaded from the Internet without realizing they have done harm for others’ right. Music artists work very hardly to compose music. If not paid, he will lose enthusiasm to go ahead, and gradually we will find beautiful musics nowhere.

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I am deeply impressed by the great changes that have been taken place in the school over the past three years.

In May 12,2008, a severe earthquake destroys almost everything in the school，leaving badly-damaged buildings. It is now, however, taking on a new look. Tall building have been put up, including classrooms and laboratory buildings, and a library. There has also a newly-built standard playground. In the new environment, teachers and students are living happy and working hard. It is really amazed that the once-ruined place has now been turned into beautiful school, full of life.

Obviously, without the help of the whole society, there would be no new school today. It is love and concern that has brought about the great changes. Many hands make light work. We can work wonders if you unite as a family, caring for each other and helping those in need. Union is strength.

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(、)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I was very excited about my holiday spending in Spain last year. I took the plane to get there with my best friend，Mike，but our flight was really enjoyable and relaxed. Once there，we didn't want to go by foot，so we chose the bus where took us throughout the central areas and the suburbs. Spanish people are very friendly and the food is such delicious. We all had a wonderful time. Most importantly，the reason why I still remember the trip is that I attracted by the amount of progresses that Spain has achieved. In a fact，if I save enough money，I will go to

Spain again.

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My grandma lives in the country and has a big yard.Although she is over seventy,she lives the active life, making her yard look a farm.She likes animals,so she kept five dogs,two cats,six hens,and four geese.The hens and geese regular lay eggs,most of that she gives to me.

It is a hard task to feed and cares for all these animals.But she likes it.My grandma also grows many more vegetables in my yard.As a rule,she grows plants without chemical fertilizers and prevents pests without use farm chemicals.Her vegetables are organic or we all like them!

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多着（从第11处起）不计分。

Ladies and gentlemen,

I would tell you some good news.To provide more chances for us to practise the English, I have recently set up an English group blog naming We Love English.

Variously things can be done on the blog. Firstly, we can post our journals here, sharing our thoughts and daily life. Secondly, the blog is a good place for us to exchange our good learning experiences, which will certainly lead to learn English well. Thirdly, if we should have any problems with our English study, just putting them on the blog, where we will soon find effective solutions the problems offered by other students.

Everybody are welcome to join the group blog. I’m sure you will benefit greatly of it.

That’s all. Thank you.

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I live in a distant village in the mountains,which people like raising dogs.I have an adult dog and he was not very big in size.Last week,the relative sent two little dogs to me.They were unable to walk well,even fall to the ground now and then.They moved like two fur balls,funny and lovely.

However,I feared that if the adult dog might dislike them and even attack them.So I kept the two little one in a box.One day,I was astonishing to see the adult dog lying in the box.Under them comfortably lay the two little dogs!Now the three dogs get along well one another and live happy together.

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