题目内容
【题目】Tom是你的同桌,最近他很郁闷,因为他和父母之间有一些分歧。请根据以下提供的内容用英语写一篇短文。
Tom的烦恼 | 1. 数学和语文学得很好,英语和物理比较难,学习压力大。 2. 父母不理解,觉得他每门功课都应该是班上最好的,还经常看他的日记。 3. 他周末想看电视,可是父母除了学习,什么都不让他做。 4. 现在对学习不感兴趣。 |
你的建议 | (至少二条) |
注意:1. 短文应包括所提供内容,也可以适当发挥。
2. 词数:150词左右。开头已给出,不算入总词数。
My deskmate, Tom, feels unhappy recently, for he disagrees with his parents about what he should do or what he shouldn’t do.
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【答案】My deskmate, Tom feels unhappy recently, for he disagrees with his parents about what he should do or what he shouldn’t do.
Tom does well in Maths and Chinese, while he finds English and physics difficult to learn. He is under great pressure from studies. However, his parents don’t understand him and insist that he should be the best at every subject in his class. What’s more, they often read his diaries. Besides, he feels like watching TV at weekends, but his parents allow him to do nothing but study. Worst of all, he’s so annoyed that he shows no interest in his study at all.
“I think, first of all, he should communicate with his parents, telling them his trouble. And he should cheer up as soon as possible, working hard to quality himself for a job in the future. Additionally, he’d better turn to his teachers for advice and make a plan on how to improve his English and physics.
【解析】写作背景:Tom是你的同桌,最近他很郁闷,因为他和父母之间有一些分歧。要求根据提供的内容用英语写一篇短文。本文以一般现在时为主,主要分两部分:首先介绍Tom的烦恼,1. 数学和语文学得很好,英语和物理比较难,学习压力大。2. 父母不理解,觉得他每门功课都应该是班上最好的,还经常看他的日记。3. 他周末想看电视,可是父母除了学习,什么都不让他做。4. 现在对学习不感兴趣。然后写出你的至少二条建议。
写作时要注意要点全面,条理清楚,观点明确。还要注意高级词汇和句型的运用,如宾语从句what he should do or what he shouldn’t do. that he should be the best at every subject in his class.和that he shows no interest in his study at all.词语under great pressure, communicate with,cheer up, as soon as possible,连接词However, What’s more, Besides, Worst of all, Additionally等。