题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Bob得知你以优异的成绩考入晋城一中,特来信向你表示祝贺,并询问你在新学校的学习和生活情况,请你根据以下内容给Bob写一封回信,并邀请他方便的时候来你校参观。内容包括:
1.你的快乐;2.你的苦恼;3.你的打算。
注意:1.词数100词左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.书信的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:挑战challenge [n.] 具有挑战性的challenging [adj.]
压力 pressure [n.]
Dear Bob,
I’m glad to hear from you. Thank you for your kind letter. Let me tell you something about my new school life.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Bob,
I’m glad to hear from you. Thank you for your kind letter. Let me tell you something about my new school life.
I am happy that my new school is very beautiful and each classroom has modem teaching facilities. I have made many new friends who are kind and helpful. We can take part in different outdoor activities after class, such as playing basketball and singing.
However, sometimes I feel upset. For one thing, my home is far away from the school, so I often miss my parents. For another, we have to study many subjects, of which I find maths, physics and chemistry are a little bit challenging. (Besides, my parents and teachers expect a lot from me, and I am under great pressure.)
I will get used to the new school life as soon as possible. (In addition, I have decided to work hard to live up to my parents, expectations.)
Would you like to come and visit my new school when it is convenient to/for you? I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】本文属于提纲类作文,要求根据题目所给内容给Bob写一封回信,并邀请他方便的时候来你校参观。要注意书信的格式和特殊用词。1.你的快乐;2.你的苦恼,考虑用用一般现在时来写;你的打算,考虑用一般将来时来写。要点:1.你的快乐;2.你的苦恼;3.你的打算。
这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合给出的开头,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面,结构紧凑,是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语,为文章增色不少,如: take part in参加,far away from远离。还使用了宾语从句I am happy that my new school is very beautiful and each classroom has modem teaching facilities.和定语从句I have made many new friends who are kind and helpful.等多种句式结构,增加了文章的可读性。