题目内容
进入高三后,学习任务重、压力大,因此,有效的学习显得尤为重要。请根据你的切身体会,从合理安排、劳逸结合等方面谈谈你对有效学习的看法。字数120左右,可适当增加内容。
How to Be an Efficient Learner?
Being Senior Three students, we have a tight schedule and seem to have endless homework to do every day. Because of limited time, it’s important to be an efficient learner. But how can we become efficient learners?
Firstly, we should make a realistic agenda, which lists all we have to do and the deadline to cover. Secondly, divide our spare time into several parts to make sure we go through all the subjects and try to be well-balanced students. Thirdly, take regular exercise to refresh our mind and energy and make sure we are healthy enough to get round our lessons. Remember: All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Besides, discussing with classmates about difficult problems to find best solutions can be of help. It’s also important to read extra books to ensure you feed on new ideas from time to time.
All in all, efficiency is the key to success.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇开放性作文写作,话题是关于有效的学习,内容要考生自己发挥,给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体,如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候,可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮点说明】文章使用了很好的短语和句子:divide…into…将…分成, go through通过,be of help有帮助, the key to success成功的关键,. Being Senior Three students, we have a tight schedule and seem to have endless homework to do every day. 这句话使用了现在分词做状语,Because of limited time, it’s important to be an efficient learner.这句话使用了it做形式主语, we should make a realistic agenda, which lists all we have to do and the deadline to cover. 这句话使用了非限制性定语从句,文章还使用了谚语: All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.特别值得一题的是文章通过Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly, Besides, All in all, efficiency is 这些关联词的使用更加连贯了。
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