Question

【题目】假定你是李华。你的笔友Peter要到你所在城市的一所大学学习中文，他来信询问这个城市的有关情况。请写一封回信，要点如下：

表示欢迎；

介绍城市情况（气候、交通、饮食等）

愿意帮助，鼓励进步。

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Peter,

I’m very glad to know you will come to study here．Welcome to our city!

Here is something you want to know．The city is famous for its mild weather, neither too hot nor too cold．The average temperature is about 20℃．The transportation is very convenient．We are lucky to have varieties of choices such as taking a bus or a taxi, riding a bicycle or taking the underground railway．As for the food, I dare say it is international, varying from local snacks to the tastes all over the world．

I’m sure this city won’t let you disappointed and you will definitely lead a happy life here．If you have any other questions, don’t hesitate to contact me．

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

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