题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假如你是一名高二年级的学生,你发现班上有些同学晚上学习到深夜。白天也不安排休息时间,但往往课堂上昏昏欲睡,有些同学饮食习惯不好,不吃早餐。请你写篇发言稿,在班会上劝同学们合理安排作息时间,注意健康饮食,保证学习好、身体好.。
要求:1.字数100字左右。 2.可适当发挥,使讲话完整通畅。
Dear classmates,
It’s a pleasure for me to have a chance to make a short speech today.
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【答案】
Dear classmates
It’s a pleasure for me to have a chance to make a short speech today. Recently, I have found that some of our classmates study late into the night and do not spare any time to take a rest during the day either, but they often cannot help falling asleep in class. And some classmates seldom have breakfast, which is also a bad habit and will surely do harm to their health.
In my opinion, it’s extremely important for us to have enough sleep and a proper diet. We must learn to make wise use of our time, and only in this way can we keep fit and study well. I wonder if you agree with me.
Thank you for listening!
【解析】
试题分析:假如你是一名高二年级的学生,你发现班上有些同学晚上学习到深夜。白天也不安排休息时间,但往往课堂上昏昏欲睡,有些同学饮食习惯不好,不吃早餐。请你写篇发言稿,在班会上劝同学们合理安排作息时间,注意健康饮食,保证学习好、身体好.。写作时不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。
【亮点说明】It’s a pleasure for me to have a chance to make a short speech today. 运用固定句式; And some classmates seldom have breakfast, which is also a bad habit and will surely do harm to their health.
运用定语从句;In my opinion, it’s extremely important for us to have enough sleep and a proper diet. 运用并列句;We must learn to make wise use of our time, and only in this way can we keep fit and study well. I wonder if you agree with me.运用only的倒装句;Recently, I have found that some of our classmates study late into the night and do not spare any time to take a rest during the day either, but they often cannot help falling asleep in class.此句式为文章增色,显得文章很有档次。