题目内容
【题目】第24届冬季奥林匹克运动会将于2022年2月在北京和张家口市联合举行。现面向社会招募志愿者。假如你是李华,请根据自己的情况写一封申请信。内容包括:
1.热爱体育;2.英语流利;3.性格外向开朗;有组织能力
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have heard the news that you are recruiting volunteers for the Winter Olympic Games to be held in 2022. ____________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have heard the news that you are recruiting volunteers for the Winter Olympic Games to be held in 2022.So I am writing to apply to be one of the volunteers.
I am LiHua, an 18–year-old boy who is built up by doing sports regularly in my spare time. I love sports so much that I can devote all my energies to serving the game. Besides, with a very good command of English, I can speak English fluently, which makes it easier for me to help foreigners in trouble. Meanwhile, not only do I have the ability to organize activities, but also I am outgoing and energetic which benefits me in communicating with strangers.
Everything taken into account, I think I am qualified for the position. I would be grateful if you could consider my application and offer me the opportunity at your convenience.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本文是提纲类写作,要点已给出。写作时不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。
【亮点说明】本文是一篇申请信,格式正确,文章包含了所有要点,布局合理,使用高级句子。I have heard the news that you are recruiting volunteers for the Winter Olympic Games to be held in 2022.同位语从句和动词不定式一般式的被动式完美结合;I am LiHua, an 18 –year- old boy who is built up by doing sports regularly in my spare time同位语和定语从句运用巧妙;I love sports so much that I can devote all my energies to serving the game .结果状语从句用在句中;I can speak English fluently ,which makes it easier for me to help foreigners in trouble Meanwhile,非限制性定语从句在句中体现;not only do I have the ability to organize activities, but also I am outgoing and energetic which benefits me in communicating with strangers.倒装句堪称经典;Everything taken into account, I think I am qualified for the position.过去分词的独立主格结构巧妙至极;另外,.Besides, Meanwhile, I would be grateful if---,的运用为文章增色添彩。