题目内容
假若如你是新华中学的学生李华。周五下午,你最喜欢的Carter教授将举行题为“How to be a good language learner”的报告,但你因在新东方(New Orient)培训学校学习不能参加。请你根据以下提示给你的同学David写一封电子邮件:
1.解释原因:
2.表达遗憾;
3.要求Daivd对报告内容录音。
注意:
1.词数:120字左右。
2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
1.解释原因:
2.表达遗憾;
3.要求Daivd对报告内容录音。
注意:
1.词数:120字左右。
2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
How are you?
I've learned that Prof Carter is going to give us a talk on “How to be a good language learner next Friday afternoon. He is my favorite teacher, you know, but unfortunately, I won't be able to attend the lecture as I am now studying English in New Orient Training School in Beijing, and I won't get back when the lecture begins. So I wish you could give me a hand to make up for the loss. Could you please make a recording of the lecture? At least I can listen to the lecture when I go back, and moreover, if I have any questions, I hope to get satisfactory answers from you. I would appreciate it if you could do me the favour. Many thanks.
Look forward to seeing you again soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
How are you?
I've learned that Prof Carter is going to give us a talk on “How to be a good language learner next Friday afternoon. He is my favorite teacher, you know, but unfortunately, I won't be able to attend the lecture as I am now studying English in New Orient Training School in Beijing, and I won't get back when the lecture begins. So I wish you could give me a hand to make up for the loss. Could you please make a recording of the lecture? At least I can listen to the lecture when I go back, and moreover, if I have any questions, I hope to get satisfactory answers from you. I would appreciate it if you could do me the favour. Many thanks.
Look forward to seeing you again soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
试题分析:这是一封电子邮件,写的时候用书信的格式,内容要点给出了一个提纲,要考生自己拓展,要选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思,可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。So I wish you could give me a hand to make up for the loss.这句话使用了虚拟语气, I would appreciate it if you could do me the favour.这句话的it做形式主语用的很好,还要使用合适的连接词来连接各要点,使文章成为一个整体。
点评:除了注意书信的格式,表达方式的选择和要点的完备也很重要,要点不能有遗漏或者省略。也不能按照表格写出提纲式,所以在写作的时候要变换句式,同时要注意因为是邮件要写得亲切直白。不要过去堆砌。
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