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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

With the improvement of people’s living standards, more and more people possess their own car. Some thought it is good to own a car. First, it’s an convenient, fast and comfortable means of transportation, that saves people much time on the trip. It also makes businesses and industries to develop faster.

However, others have different opinions, thinking that cars give waste gases and pollute the environment around. Have too many cars will have some bad effects, such as more accidents and crowdedness. Besides, lacking parking lots are another big problem.

As far as I’m concerned, we ought to think careful before buying cars. Even if we have cars, we should use it less.

Answer 1

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【解析】第一处：考查名词单复数。car为可数名词，故将car改为cars。

第二处：考查动词。本文通篇用现在时，此处也是，故将thought改为think。

第三处：本题考查冠词。an用在以元音音素开头的单词，a用在以辅音音素开头的单词，此处convenient开头发辅音音素，故将an改为a。

第四处：考查关系代词。此处关系代词需引导从句修饰前面的主句，代替主语所表示的整体概念，所以此处关系代词应为which，故将that改为which。

第五处：考查固定搭配。make sb/sth do“使某人/某物做……”，故将to develop改为 develop。

第六处：考查词组及句意。此处指车排放废气，give off“发出、排放”，故将give改为give off。

第七处：考查动名词作主语。动名词作主语表示普通的、一般的行为，不定式作主语表示具体的行为，此处拥有车为一般行为，故将have改为having。

第八处：考查主谓一致。lacking parking作主语时，谓语动词用单数，故将are改为is。

第九处：考查形容词。分析句子结构可知，此处需要副词，故将careful改为carefully。

第十处：考查代词。此处它代指前面的汽车cars，cars为复数，故将it改为them。