题目内容
【题目】短文改错 (每小题1分,共10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Everyone should take the action to reduce haze(雾霾), which is harmful to our health. First of all, I believe if we plant more trees, there will be less haze in their city. Trees can absorb exhaust fumes(尾气) from cars, thus reduce pollution. Second, the government should punish the factories where produce too many fumes. Exhaust fumes is the main cause of haze and do greatly harm to people’s health. Maybe we can move factories to areas where few peoples live. Third, I think it was a great idea to encourage people to use public transportation. Last but not least, we can call in citizens to ride bikes if they travel short journeys.
【答案】
Everyone should take
action to reduce haze(雾霾), which is harmful to our health. First of all, I believe
if we plant more trees, there will be less haze in
city. Trees can absorb exhaust fumes(尾气) from cars, thus
pollution. Second, the government should punish the factories
produce too many fumes. Exhaust fumes
the main cause of haze and do
harm to people’s health. Maybe we can move factories to areas where few
live. Third, I think it
a great idea to encourage people to use public transportation. Last but not least, we can call
citizens to ride bikes if they travel short journeys.
【解析】
【语篇解读】雾霾对人类健康有很大的危害。本文介绍了减少雾霾的四个有效措施:植树、惩罚污染企业、乘坐公共交通工具、骑自行车。
第一处:去action前the。考查冠词。take action是固定短语,表"采取行动",action前应用零冠词,故去掉the。
第二处:believe 后加that。考查宾语从句。believe之后的宾语从句中又包含有if引导的条件状语从句,故宾语从句的引导词that不可以省略。
第三处:their改our。考查代词。对应本句中的第一人称代词we,应用our。
第四处:reduce改reducing。动词reduce跟在thus之后作结果状语,且reduce与句子主语trees是逻辑上的主动关系,故用reducing。
第五处:where改that/which。考查定语从句。关系代词在定语从句中作主语,指代先行词factories,应用that或which。
第六处:is改are。考查主谓一致。主语是exhaust fumes,且该句叙述一般情况,应用一般现在时,故谓语动词用复数are。
第七处:greatly改great。考查形容词。修饰名词harm应用形容词,故将greatly改为great。
第八处:peoples改people。考查名词。people表示"人,人们",无复数形式。
第九处:was改is。考查时态。本文叙述一般情况,都用一般现在时,故将was改为is。
第十处:call in改call on。考查动词短语。call on sb. to do sth.表示"号召某人做某事";call in表示"召集"。