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【题目】【来源】【百强校】2015-2016学年甘肃天水一中高一下第一次月考英语试卷（带解析）

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假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike给你来信告诉你他要和父母在春节期间到中国度假。想询问有关中国传统节日———春节的情况，请你给他写一封回信向他介绍这个节日和庆祝活动等。（第一句已经给出）

Dear Mike,

I’m glad to know that you are coming to China with your parents and spend Spring Festival here.

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Yours，

Li Hua

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Dear Mike,

I’m glad to know that you are coming to China with your parents and spend Spring Festival here.

It is the one of the most important holiday during which family will get home to celebrate no matter where they work. The spring festival start with lunar 1th and lasts 15 days. All the family number usually clean house before the Spring Festival to sweep bad, but also decorate the doors and windows with red papercuts, which means good luck. Family number usually have supper together on the New Year's Eve and watch TV. Then people visit friends and relatives wishing happy new year and child often get money from parents or relatives as a lunar New Year gift and wear new clothes.

I like spring festival not only wear new clothes but also get lucky money and have delicious food. I am looking forward to your coming with your parents because better to experience than say well.

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike给你来信告诉你他要和父母在春节期间到中国度假。想询问有关中国传统节日———春节的情况，请你给他写一封回信向他介绍这个节日和庆祝活动等。这是一篇明显的提纲作文，就是把文章的情景和内容要求分成块，以叙述的形式列出以进行写作。考生在审题的时候应该注意审要求、审文体、审人称、审时态。题文已经告知要求，那么文体应为应用文体；又根据“你是李华” 写作时即用第一人称“我”，即李华；时态主要用一般现在时即可。考生在写作时应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来。表达时应该综合运用所掌握的知识，避开生僻的词汇，并克服母语的干扰，按照英语的习惯方式，用地道的英语表达出来，力求做到语言准确无误。然后根据要点选词组句，然后按照篇章结构连句成篇。

【亮点说明】本文语言凝练，论点鲜明，条理层次清晰。文章第二段介绍中国的春节和庆祝活动；第二段就介绍自己的看法。文章使用了which引导的定语从句和no matter where引导的让步状语从句during which family will get home to celebrate no matter where they work（在这期间不管他们在哪里工作家人们都要回家）；which means good luck（这意味着好运）。高级短语和结构：not only…but also…不仅…而且…。最后一句使用I am looking forward to your coming with your parents because better to experience than say well我和父母期待着您的到来，因为经历比说的更好。作者提出自己的期望并给文章一个完美的结束。