Question

【题目】【2016届襄阳五中、宜昌一中、龙泉中学高三上学期九月联考】假设你是李华，上个月去英国参加了一次夏令营活动，活动期间一直住在Mr. Smith家中。他们给你提供了很多帮助，请写一封感谢信表达对他们的感谢。

内容要点：1. 感谢Smith夫妇；

2. 你的感受；

3. 邀请Smith夫妇来华旅游。

注意: 1. 词数：100字左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

Dear Mr. and Mrs. Smith,

How are you doing? ______________________________________________________________ __

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr. and Mrs. Smith,

How are you doing? I am writing to express my gratitude to you for offering accommodation when I was in England.

It was so kind of you to take care of me when I was not used to the weather there. Besides, you bought Chinese food for me, which really surprised me. What's more, I shall always remember those ancient stories you told me, which helped me know more about your culture and history. Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories, and I will cherish them forever.

I will feel honored and pleased if you can come to China for a visit and I will be your guide. Would you kindly let me know if you can make it?

Thanks again for what you have done for me. May you be blessed in everything you do.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：考查应用文写作。本文属于应用文中的书信，要求考生以李华的身份给Mr. Smith写信。感谢你在英国夏令营时，住在对方家里时给你提供的很多帮助。所以本文使用第一人称，第一和第三相间的时态。要点：1.感谢对方在夏令营期间提供的诸多帮助。2.感受：当自己不能使用英国气候和饮食时，对方非常周到地为自己服务，还购买了中国食物。对方帮助学习英语以及英国文化和历史，这些都给自己留下了深刻印象。3.邀请对方来中国旅游，愿意充当对方的导游。并再次表示感谢。建议文章分成三段，三个要点各成一段，中心内容在第二段，在阐述个人感受时，尽量使用串联成分让文章更有条理。