题目内容
【题目】短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Every day, in all kinds of weather, a lot of people go jogging (running slowly). Why has jogging became so popular? Most people start jogging because you hear it is a very good form of exercise. Jogging makes the heart strong and help people control their weight and stay slim. If you jog regular, you needn’t take pills or skip meals to lose weight. Jogging can also make you to feel better.
Donald Robbins, he is 42 years old and works in an office, began jogging a few years later because he felt he was overweight. At first he could only run 300 metres, and two years later, he ran a marathon — over 42 kilometres.
Do you jog? If you do, be sure to ask your doctor on advice. Does jogging cost much? Almost nothing. But it is very important to have a pair of shoe that are made especially for jogging. If not, when you run on hard ground for a long time it may cause your feet to hurt.
【答案】
Every day, in all kinds of weather, a lot of people go jogging (running slowly).Why has jogging
so popular? Most people start jogging because
hear it is a very good form of exercise. Jogging makes the heart strong and
people control their weight and stay slim. If you jog
, you needn’t take pills or skip meals to lose weight. Jogging can also make you to feel better.
Donald Robbins,
is 42 years old and works in an office, began jogging a few years
because he felt he was overweight. At first he could only run 300 metres,
two years later, he ran a marathon — over 42 kilometres.
Do you jog? If you do, be sure to ask your doctor
advice. Does jogging cost much? Almost nothing. But it is very important to have a pair of
that are made especially for jogging. If not, when you run on hard ground for a long time it may cause your feet to hurt.
【解析】
第一处:became→become become的过去分词为become,故把became改为become。
第二处
第三处:help→helps 主语是Jogging,谓语动词用单数,故把help改为helps。
第四处:regular→regularly 副词修饰动词,故把regular改为regularly。
第五处:to去掉 make后加宾语时要接不带to的动词不定式作宾语补足语,即动词原形,故把to去掉。
第六处:he→who 此处为非限制性定语从句,先行词是Donald Robbins,指人,故把he改为who。
第七处:later→ago 根据语境可知,此处是说几年前他开始慢跑,故把later改为ago。
第八处:and→but 此处说的是慢跑后与慢跑前的对比,表示语意的转折,故把and改为but。
第九处:on→for ask sb. for sth表示"向某人要/请求某物",故把on改为for。
第十处:shoe→shoes 一双鞋是两只鞋,应该用shoe的复数形式,故把shoe改为shoes。