Question

【题目】短文改错(共10小题；每小题l分，满分10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

It was on a warm autumn day that my father and I walk into my new high school. After registered in the classroom, the volunteer took me to my dormitory. Altogether I had five roommates, two of which arrived later. I got to know my new roommate immediately. Although I was quite unwilling to say “Goodbye” to my father, but he had to leave to my hometown in the evening. I suddenly realized I had grown up and that I had to look after me and live independently. Not until then I know my senior high school life had real begun.

Answer 1

【答案】

It was on a warm autumn day that my father and I into my new high school. After in the classroom, volunteer took me to my dormitory. Altogether I had five roommates, two of arrived later. I got to know my new immediately. Although I was quite unwilling to say “Goodbye” to my father, he had to leave my hometown in the evening. I suddenly realized I had grown up and that I had to look after and live independently. Not until then I know my senior high school life had begun.

【解析】

第一处：这篇文章主要使用一般过去时。故walk改为walked。

第二处：介词after后面接动名词。故registered改为registering。

第三处：这里泛指“一个志愿者”，用不定冠词，volunteer是辅音音素开头的单词。故the改为a。

第四处：使用非限制性定语从句，先行词是five roommates，定语从句用two of +whom引导。故which改为whom。

第五处：根据上文five roommates可知，作者的新室友有五个，用复数。故roommate改为roommates。

第六处：although虽然，不能和but搭配使用。故去掉but。

第七处：leave for为固定搭配，意为“动身离开”。故to改为for。

第八处：句意：我不得不照顾自己。使用反身代词。故me改为myself。

第九处：Not until then放在句首，后面用部分倒装，这篇文章使用一般过去时，而且know是实义动词，用助动词did倒装。故then 后加did。

第十处：修饰动词begun用副词。故real改为really。