Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌系的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线（ ），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.

At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”

My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】去掉in

【2】anything 改为something

【3】better改成best

【4】decide改成decided

【5】step改为steps

【6】well改成good

【7】after改成when/while

【8】a改为the

【9】just后加to

【10】enjoy改为enjoying

【解析】

【1】句意：我的足球教练上个星期退休了。last week前面不加介词，去掉in。

【2】句意：我想在他退休聚会上为他做些特别的事情。肯定句用something。

【3】句意：我妈妈做的是世界上最好的饼干。用最高级，better改成best。

【4】句意：所以我决定向她求助。这篇文章使用一般过去时，decide改成decided。

【5】句意：妈妈教我一些基本的烘焙的步骤。step 是可数名词，用复数steps。

【6】句意：我认为这些饼干很好。做表语用形容词，well改成good。

【7】句意：我唯一的错误是在我将它们打包的时候将它们掉在地上。

【8】这里是特指第一段提到的退休聚会。a改为the。

【9】句意：我可能明年要再退休一次，只是想得到更多这样的饼干。用不定式做目的状语。just后加to。

【10】句意：我最喜欢的照片是我和我的教练在聚会上开心地享受饼干。of后面接动名词，my coach and me是逻辑主语，enjoy改为enjoying。