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【题目】书面表达

【全国百强校】2016-2017学年江西省南昌市第十中学高二上学期期末考试英语试卷

假如你是李雷。你的好友韩梅梅因不擅长与别人交流，感到非常痛苦。最近，她来信向你求助。请你根据一下提示给她写一封建议信，鼓励她走出困境。主要内容应包括：

1.我们周围不擅长交流的人挺多的，劝她不必为此事苦恼；

2.告诉她与别人有效地交流是很重要的。与她人搞好关系，可以有助于我们的学习，还能增加成功的机会；

3.结合自身，给出合理的建议鼓励她走出困境。

注意：1.字数：100字左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Han Mei Mei,

I know you are feeling annoyed these days because you are not able to communicate with others effectively. It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on it.

As a saying goes, every man has his faults. I notice some people around us are also not good at communication. So you don't have to worry too much about it. Of course, good communication is of great importance for us to create a pleasant relationship with others, which can not only be helpful to our study but also increase our chance of success. That is why I would like to make a few suggestions to you.

First of all, be honest and frank to those whom you talk to so as to be understood easily by others.

Second, be aware of what you want to say and express yourself clearly. What's more, you'd better try to understand others when they talk so that you can exchange ideas with them freely.

I hope my advice will be of great help to you.

All the best.

Yours,

Li Lei

【解析】试题分析：

题干中韩梅梅因不擅长与别人交流，感到非常痛苦，本文要求给好朋友韩梅梅写一封建议信，鼓励她走出困境。文章给出了提纲式汉语提示。成文时应注意以下几点：(1)内容要点齐全，完整叙述三方面主要内容。(2)人称：以第一人称和第二人称为主。(3)时态：一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。

【亮点说明】

使用高级句型：(1) it充当形式主语It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on it. ；谚语As a saying goes, every man has his faults.；非限制性定语从句Of course, good communication is of great importance for us to create a pleasant relationship with others, which can not only be helpful to our study but also increase our chance of success. ；表语从句That is why I would like to make a few suggestions to you.；定语从句be honest and frank to those whom you talk to so as to be understood easily by others.。2.使用了过渡词语：First of all ，Second ，What's more等。3.使用了重要短语：good at擅长； worry about担心；had better最好；exchange… with和…互换。