题目内容
【题目】Correction 5 （2017届四川省四市高三一诊）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 (\) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On the Earth Day, my classmates and I decided to do everything for our school. We were divided into three group. The first group picked up rubbish and put it in plastic bags. The second group painted the walls of the classrooms, where had been so dirty. The third group planted many trees in the courtyard under our teachers’ help. I helped dig the holes on the ground, put the trees in the holes, fill the holes with soil. Later on, we water the trees. It was a tired day but we felt happily. Let’s devote ourselves to protect our earth!
【答案】
On 
Earth Day, my classmates and I decided to do 
for our school. We were divided into three 
. The first group picked up rubbish and put it in plastic bags. The second group painted the walls of the classrooms, 
had been so dirty. The third group planted many trees in the courtyard 
our teachers’ help. I helped dig the holes on the ground, put the trees in the holes, 
fill the holes with soil. Later on, we 
the trees. It was a 
day but we felt 
. Let’s devote ourselves to 
our earth!
【解析】
第一处：去掉the 考查冠词。按照习惯，季节、月份、星期以及节假日等名词前使用零冠词。Earth Day＂地球日＂。故去掉the。
第二处：everything改成something 考查代词。everything＂任何事（物）＂，something＂一些事（物）＂。句意：在地球日那天，我同学和我决定为我们学校做点事情。故everything改成something。
第三处：group改成groups 考查名词的数。根据其前的three可知，此处应使用group的复数形式。故group改成groups。
第四处：where改成which 考查定语从句连词。分析句子成分可知，此处非限定性定语从句，先行词为the walls of the classrooms，连词在从句中作主语，应使用关系代词。故where改成which。
第五处：under改成with 考查介词搭配。固定词组：with one’s help＂在某人的帮助下＂。故under改成with。
第六处：fill前加and 考查连词。句意：我帮忙在地上挖洞、把树放在洞里、用土把洞填满。根据句意可知，此处为三个并列动词，同为help的宾语，应使用并列连词and。故fill前加and。
第七处：water改成watered 考查动词时态。根据语境可知，此处描述的是过去的动作，应使用一般过去时，意为＂随后，我们给树浇水＂。故water改成watered。
第八处：tired改成tiring 考查非谓语动词作定语。此处修饰day，意为＂这是累人的一天＂。tired＂感到累的＂，一般修饰人的感情；tiring＂令人累的＂，一般修饰物。故tired改成tiring。
第九处：happily改成happy 考查形容词。feel为感官系动词，其后要求使用形容词。故happily改成happy。
第十处：protect改成protecting 考查介词搭配。词组：devote sth. to doing sth.＂为做某事贡献……＂，to为介词。故protect改成protecting。
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