今年的4月22日是第46个世界地球日,节约资源,减少碳排放量,保护我们的地球是当前最重要的事。请写一篇80词左右的短文,倡议你的同学从小事做起,加入低碳生活一族。要求包括以下要点:

1. 节约用水、用电、用纸;

2. 去超巿购物自备购物袋;

3. 不要购买不必要的东西;

4. 不要购买一次性餐具;

5. 步行或骑自行车上学。要求:1.语句通顺,内容表述完整;

2. 首句已给出,不计人总词数;

3. 可适当发挥。

提示词:the amount of (............. 的数量).one-off(一次性的)

题型分析:此次写作是以第一人称,使用一般现在时来倡议同学们过一种低碳环保的生活以保护我们的环境。

行文思路:根据所给提示,为了节约资源、减少碳排放、保护我们的地球,"我" 可以倡议同学们从题目中要求的几件小事做起:减少我们日常生活中水、电、纸的使用(reduce the amount of water ...);自备购物袋(take our own bags );不买不必要的东西(not buy fewer things that are unnecessary );不购买、不使用一次性餐具(buy or use one-off cups ...);步行上学(walk to school);最后发出号召(Let,s...).

高分点拨:此次写作行文过程中注意句子之间的衔接,不可逐句翻译,可适当发挥。在提出建议时可以使用had better,should,shouldn't等情态动词。行文中定语从句的使用可以增加得分亮点。

佳作展示:

With global warming getting worse, more and more people choose to live a low-carbon life
in order to reduce greenhouse gases.      

    Dr. Dyana gives us some useful advice on how to learn English language well!

   1 When most people learn a new language, they are afraid of making mistakes and being laughed at. So they don't talk at all. Don't do it like this. In fact,the fast way to

master any thing is to do it by yourself. You shouldn't let fear prevent you from getting what you want.

    2            Use as many different methods and tools as you can. They will help you to learn faster and easier. You can improve your English by many different ways. For instance, the Internet is a good way for you to learn English.

    3            Stick English words on the wall in your room,put English books on your shelf,listen to English radio programs,watch English news, movies and television, listen to English songs. Speak English as often as you can. At last you can start thinking in English.

   4       You can't only learn the grammer or vocabulary,you should learn to express your meanings correctly and write in English. You can also learn the culture about the English language.

   5       Many people think doing exercises is very boring. However,you can really improve your English by doing exercises. By doing exercises or taking tests,you will see how much progress you have made.

   In the end,have fun learning English!

给上文中的几段话各选择一个合适的小标题,

A.   Use all your resources.

B.   Learn as much as possible.

C.   Do more exercises.

D.   Drive away your fear.

E.    Make English around you.

1._________ 2._______  3._________

4.______  5.    

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