题目内容
【题目】文段表达
根据中文和英文提示,写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出,其词数不计入所完成的回信内。
假如你叫李涛,最近和美国朋友Peter通过电子邮件谈论各自国家的传统节日。请根据他的问题回复邮件。
提示词语:Spring Festival, new clothes, lucky money, clean, get together, fireworks
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【答案】
Hi! Peter,
I’m glad to hear from you. As we know, there are lots of festivals in China. But my favourite festival is Spring Festival. I like it because I can not only wear new clothes but also get a lot of lucky money. Then I can use the money to buy books, CDs and so on.
Spring Festival is the most important for Chinese people. Before it, we usually clean the house and put up some decorations on the doors and windows. Families get together to eat a big dinner and watch TV on the eve of Chinese New Year. At midnight, we go outdoors to set off fireworks. They are so beautiful in the sky. We also visit our friends or relatives during Spring Festival, so it’s a great time to show our love.
How about your favourite festival? Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Tao
【解析】
试题分析:本文要求写一封邮件,同学们对此形式非常熟悉,内容也和学生的生活联系密切,所以写起来应该是得心应手,写作时应注意的问题是:一、仔细审题,写邮件的目的是就道歉的事情寻求建议,所以内容要围绕三个要点展开。二、在写邮件时要开门见山提出写信的目的,就本文而言要首先表明自己对礼物的建议。三、在篇章结构方面,要注意层次性和逻辑性,尤其是在解释理由方面,可以使用一些表示层次的连词,如firstly、secondly、besides、what’s more等。四、在语言方面,要简洁明了,尽量使用多种句式结构以提高文章档次。
写作亮点:本篇书面表达要点全面,层次清晰。开头用虚拟语气的句子委婉地提出了自己的建议。在解释原因和提出其他建议时,作者用到了en I can use the money to buy books, CDs and so on. Families get together to eat a big dinner and watch TV on the eve of Chinese New Year. we go outdoors to set off fireworks. so it’s a great time to show our love显示了作者对句型结构的准确把握,成为了文章的亮点。