题目内容

【题目】书面表达

根据下表提示以My Sister 为题写一篇短文。

要求:1. 语法正确,意思连贯,书写规范,要点齐全,发挥想象,适当拓展。

2. 100个词左右。

基本情况

1. Amy,13岁,英国人,短发,苗条,大眼睛

2. 阳光中学七年级一班学生,

学习情况

3. 最喜欢的学科是数学

4. 经常帮助同学学习

生活方式

5. 经常吃汉堡、鸡肉和巧克力,但很少吃蔬菜和水果;

6. 她两顿饭之间还吃甜食,很少运动

7. 觉得是改变生活方式的时候了

8. …….

兴趣爱好

9. 喜欢打排球,听音乐,擅长……

10. 是…的一员

服装打扮

11. 黄色外套,蓝裤子

12. 粉色发夹与上衣很配

My Sister

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【答案】

My sister

My sister is Amy. She is 13 years old. She is an English girl. She has short hair and two big eyes and she is slim. She is in Class 1, Grade 7 in Sunshine Middle School. Her favorite subject is maths and she is always ready to help others with it. She likes eating hamburgers, chicken and chocolate, but she seldom has vegetables and fruits. She has sweets between two meals and seldom does sports. She thinks her living style is unhealthy and it is time to change. She likes playing volleyball. She is a member of school volleyball team. She also likes listening to music and she is good at dancing. She wears a yellow coat and blue trousers. Her pink hairband matches her coat well.

【解析】

试题分析:这篇作文要求我们介绍自己的姐姐,题目中给出了我们具体的信息,内容非常充实完整,我们只需要用正确的英语将他们表达出来。这些内容包括Amy的一些基本情况如年龄、外貌、所在学校等;还有Amy最喜欢的科目以及她的爱好;还有她的生活方式和服装打扮等。通过分析可知,这篇作文我们应使用一般现在时态,第三人称单数she来叙述,所以我们要注意每句话中谓语动词形式的变化。写作时,我们还可以使用一些好的短语和句型,来使文章表达得更加流畅、连贯。

写作亮点:这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短语的内容非常完整,层次非常的清晰,短文中包含了题目要求的所有信息,并且表述的非常有秩序,不杂乱;其次这篇短文使用了正确的人称和时态,并且注意了动词第三人称单数形式的变化;第三,短文中使用了一些较好的短语和句型,如Her favorite subject is maths and she is always ready to help others with it.、She thinks her living style is unhealthy and it is time to change、She is a member of school volleyball team等。

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【题目】The aim (目的) of students who come to school is to study. But studying requires (需要) a right way, or you waste either the time or the money. The following are the ways of studying.

The best time for reading is morning, because in the morning, the air is fresh and the mind is clear. For that reason, we can get good results (结果).

In studying we must have patience (耐心). If we have not known a text well, we must read it again. We shouldn’t read the next one till we have understood the first one.

When we are studying, we must put our hearts into the book, or we can get nothing from the book while we are reading.

We must always ask “whys”. If it is not well understood, write it down and ask our teachers, parents, or friends. In any possible way, we must know it completely and what we’ve leaned can be used well and made better.

Though there are many ways for studying, yet the above mentioned (提到的) will be quite enough if we can keep them in heart and do so.

【1】The passage tells us ______.

A. the importance of reading

B. to read in the morning

C. to pay attention to the ways of studying

D. to have patience in studying

【2】The passage has taught us ______ ways of studying.

A. three B. four C. five D. many

【3】We’d better read in the morning because ______.

A. it’s easy to remember what we have learned

B. the air is fresh and the mind is clear

C. it’s difficult to get good results

D. both A and C

【4】If we can’t put our hearts into the book when we read, it is ______.

A. easy to understand it well

B. better to get something from it

C. impossible (不可能) for us to get something from it

D. possible (可能) to learn something from it

【5】In studying we must always ask “whys” in order to ______.

A. understand the book well

B. write down the questions

C. do with the new words

D. get some questions to ask our teachers

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