题目内容
8.每个人的成长都是一种蜕变的过程,从幼稚走向成熟,从逆境走向成功,请你回忆一下你在成长过程中所经历的一次蜕变,把它写出来与我们一起分享,好吗?要求短文内容包含以下信息:1.变化前后分别是什么样子的?
2.促成你转变的主要原因是什么?
3.你为此变化而付出了怎样的努力?
4.谈谈你变化后的感受.
提示:
1.字数要求在80-100词左右
2.短文中不能出现真实姓名和校名等信息
3.开头已给出不计入总数.
_____makes me change
I used to bea shy girl and stay in the classroom instead of playing with classmates after class. I only like playing computer games at home.Because I hated English,my English mark is very low in the exam.Later,a girl came to my class,and she changed my life.She became my best friend.She asked me to play outside with others.She helped me with my English by encouraging me to read English aloud,to talk to her in English.I also practice English after school.Gradually,My English score was higher and higher.Now,I am a confident and outgoing girl.I have changed so much that many people like to make friends with me.From then on,I have confidence to do better in the future..
分析 这是一篇提纲作文.主题是谈谈自己在成长过程中所经历的最大的一次转变.结合写作内容,时态主要为一般过去时.人称主要为第一人称并辅以第三人称.
写作思路:考生需要首先审清主题,围绕主题展开作文.
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文,即本文的写作要点:
1.变化前后分别是什么样子的?
2.促成你转变的主要原因是什么?
3.你为此变化而付出了怎样的努力?
4.谈谈你变化后的感受.
常用到的重点短语:
used to do sth过去常常
instead of 代替而不是
help sb with sth帮助某人做某事
by doing sth通过某种方式
比较级+and+比较级 越来越…
高分句型:
1.I①used to be a shy girl and stay in the classroom②instead of playing with classmates after class.
①用used to do sth表示过去常常,来说明自己的过去.
②instead of 表示代替,而不是,of是介词,后加名词代词或动名词,此处是跟动名词;play with sb意为"和某人玩".
2.I have changed so much that many people like to make friends with me.
本句是so…that表示如此…以至于…,that引导的结果状语从句.so是副词修饰这里的形容词much.其中的make friends with sb表示和谁交朋友.
解答 I used to be a shy girl and stay in the classroom instead of playing with classmates after class.(高分句型) I only like playing computer games at home.Because I hated English,my English mark is very low in the exam.(变化前的样子)Later,a girl came to my class,and she changed my life.(转变的原因)She became my best friend.She asked me to play outside with others.She helped me with my English by encouraging me to read English aloud,to talk to her in English.I also practice English after school.(我的努力)Gradually,My English score was higher and higher.Now,I am a confident and outgoing girl.I have changed so much that many people like to make friends with me.(高分句型)(变化后的样子)From then on,I have confidence to do better in the future(变化后的感受).
点评 本篇作文由于提纲材料本身决定了写作对象、范围、目的、体裁等,命题者的意图往往较容易领悟,考生在审题上一般不会出现障碍.可根据内容要点提示运用相关的句型结构灵活的展开作文.考生需注意不要逐词逐句地进行翻译,所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯.
| A. | be stopped | B. | stopped | C. | stop | D. | stopping |
| 现象 | 很多人过马路时不看红绿灯 | |
| 原因 | 缺乏交通安全意识 匆忙赶时间 | |
| 措施 | 遵守交通规则 你自己的建议… |
2.开头已给出,不计入总词数.字数:80词左右,不可逐字翻译.
3.参考词语:红绿灯traffic lights,缺乏安全意识 lack awarenessof traffic safety 遵守交通规则 obey the traffic rules
Chinese Style of Crossing Streets
Chinese style of crossing streets has been a hot topic on the internet recently.
.Now many people cross streets without looking at the traffic lights.Why?I think there are two main reasons.Some people lack awareness of traffic safety.Besides,some people are so busy that they don't want to wait for the green light.
However,it has brought danger to themselves as well as to others.So I hope something must be done to avoid traffic accidents. For example,whoever breaks the traffic rules should be punished.
As middle school students,we should obey the traffic rules.What's more,I will try my best to advise people to obey the rules.Only in this way can we cross streets safely..
| A. | sleep,get up | B. | sleep,getting up | ||
| C. | sleeping,get up | D. | sleeping,getting up |
-________.How I wish I could visit the Great Wall again.( )
| A. | Yes,I do | B. | No,I haven't | C. | No,I don't | D. | Yes,I have |
| A. | 4 bottle milks | B. | 4 bottles of milk | ||
| C. | 4 bottles of milks | D. | 4 milk |
| A. | live | B. | to live | C. | living | D. | lived |