Question

19．假如你叫李华，是九年级一班的学生．五一节期间，学校组织了部分学生参加公益活动．你给你在美国的朋友Peter发了一份电子邮件，介绍了本次活动情况和参加活动的感受．

Project	What to do	Feeling
Visit old people's home	Do some housework Sing songs …	Happy Excited …

注意：1词数80左右；电子邮件开头已给出，不计入总词数．
2结合以上要点，可围绕主题适当发挥，增加细节，以使行文连贯．
3电子邮件中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称．
Dear Peter
How are you？I want to tell you what I did during May Day．                                                     ．
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon．
Best wishes
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是给你在美国的朋友Peter发一份电子邮件，介绍五一公益活动情况和参加活动的感受．注意邮件的格式．时态主要为一般过去时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．活动；拜访敬老院
2．活动内容；做家务，唱歌…
3．感受：开心，兴奋…
常用到的重点短语：
want to do sth 想要做某事
do the laundry 洗衣服
take part in 参加
have a wonderful time 玩的开心
【高分句型】
1．We ①wanted to do something for the old people ②like my grandparents．
①want to do sth 想要做某事
②like像…一样，介词短语做后置定语，修饰先行词old people．
2．Everyone felt very happy and excited though we were tired after working for a whole day．
though虽然，引导的让步状语从句．
3．I think①it is meaningful to②take part in such activities．
①think后是省略了that的宾语从句．it作为形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语，构成it is+adj+to do sth．
②take part in 参加

解答 Dear Peter，
How are you？I want to tell you what I did during May Day．
I think some of the students in my class did an interesting job during May Day．We worked as volunteers for the old people's home．（拜访敬老院）We wanted to do something for the old people like my grandparents．【高分句型】We went there at about 8 o'clock．We did a lot of housework．Some students swept the floor．Some did the laundry for them．We also sang and danced with them．We had a wonderful time together．（活动内容；做家务，唱歌）
Everyone felt very happy and excited though we were tired after working for a whole day．【高分句型】I think it is meaningful to take part in such activities．【高分句型】I will not forget the experience．（感受）
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon．
Best wishes
Li Hua．

点评 这题图表类作文，所给材料较为详细，逻辑清楚，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来．根据要点内容可知短语主要应用一般过去时态，句型以简单句为主．写作时要灵活运用，注意主谓一致，单词拼写正确．
本题因为要点已经很明确，要注意使用正确的英语句型，避免出现汉语表达．写作中注意一些基础的写作常识，不犯低级错误．只要平时积累足够，就一定能写出一篇满意的作文．