Question

2．你去过动物园吗？请根据下列问题所给的信息，写一篇80词左右的短文．
1．When did you go to the zoo？2．Who went to the zoo with you？
3．What animals did you see？4．What animals do you like best？Why？
5．Did you feed any animals？6．Are zoos good for animals？Why？
My Trip to the Zoo
Last Sunday，I visited the zoo in our city with my classmates．We got up early and met at the outside of school gate at 6 o'clock．Then we went there by bus．Half an hour later，we arrived at the zoo．We saw many animals such as tigers，elephants，monkeys and so on．Among them we liked the monkeys best．They are very lovely．Time went quickly．Soon it was time to have lunch．We had a picnic under a big tree．We didn't feed the animals，I think it is not a place for the animals to live in because they are not free．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
Among them we liked the monkeys best because they are very lovely．其中我们最喜欢猴子因为它们很可爱．这是because引导的原因状语从句，因为…．
 高分句型二
Soon it was time to have lunch．很快就到吃午饭的时间了． it was time to do sth．该做…事情了．

解答 Last Sunday，I visited the zoo in our city with my classmates．【要点一和二，去动物园的时间和和谁去动物园】We got up early and met at the outside of school gate at 6 o'clock．Then we went there by bus．Half an hour later，we arrived at the zoo．We saw many animals such as tigers，elephants，monkeys and so on．【要点三，看见了什么动物】Among them we liked the monkeys best because they are very lovely【高分句型一，注意状语从句的使用】．Time went quickly．Soon it was time to have lunch【高分句型二，注意it was time to do sth．的使用】．We had a picnic under a big tree．【要点四，最喜欢什么动物】We didn't feed the animals，【要点五，有没有喂动物】I think it is not a place for the animals to live in because they are not free．【要点六，动物园对动物好吗】

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