Question

【题目】书面表达。

针对大部分学校要求住校的现状，英语课上同学们就“Would you like to live in school?”这一话题展开讨论。请你根据下表内容，用英语写一篇短文，介绍他们的观点,并表明自己的看法。

大部分学生	愿意	1.方便与同学交流。 2.学会照顾自己……
一些学生	不愿意	1.在家能休息的更好。 2.与家人相处时间长……
你	……	……

要求：1) 词数为80-100，不包含已给出句子的词数；

2) 你的理由至少两条。

Would you like to live in school? We had a survey about it and here’s the result.

Answer 1

【答案】

Would you like to live in school? We have a survey about it and here’s the result. Most students prefer living in school because they find it convenient to communicate with their classmates. Also, they can learn how to look after themselves in this way.

However, some students think living at home is a better choice. The main reason is that they can relax better at home. Besides, they can spend more time with their family members and get on better with them.

As for me, I’d like to live in school. That’s because I can spend more time on study. What’s more ,it’s a wonderful experience to live with other classmates.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达要求对“Would you like to live in school?”这一话题借助于调查表格展开讨论，并谈谈自己的一些感受。首先，要认真审题，掌握来信中的信息，需要回答的问题。然后整体把握写作的大致方向，谋篇布局。结合表格内容可知，大部分学生喜欢住在学校，因为方便与同学交流，学会照顾自己……然而一些学生不愿意住在学校，因为.在家能休息的更好，与家人相处时间长。最后表达自己的看法。写作中注意上下文的过度，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：本文行文流畅，语言规范。调查议论文的格式化书写很规范，文章使用三段式，第一段支持，第二段反对，第三段自己的看法，层次清晰，段落分明，使用了很多句型和短语： “As for me, What’s more ,”“The main reason is that they can relax better at home.”以及复合句“Most students prefer living in school because they find it convenient to communicate with their classmates.”的使用，丰富了文章的内容，为文章增色不少。