Question

书面表达 （满分15分）

阳光中学学生Millie因学习压力等一些心理问题，写信向心理老师求助。

假如你是心理老师Sigmund Friend，请根据参考下表提示，用英语写一篇80词左右的回信。开头和结尾已给出（不包含在词数内）。

喜欢的学科	英语 语文 历史
问题	担心数学考试而感到压力	太胖不擅长运动；讨厌跑步和做早操
建议	向数学老师求助；数学上多花些时间；穿黄色，智慧色…..	制定一个健康的食谱；坚持锻炼，尤其是在体育课上……

Dear Millie,

You say you worry about the Maths test because

 

 

 

I hope my suggestions are worth taking.

Yours

Sigmund Friend

 

Answer 1

Possible version:

You say you like English, Chinese and History, but you worry about the Maths tests because you feel stressed at times. I think you can get help from the Maths teacher. You can also spend more time on maths. You can wear yellow clothes because it is the colour of wisdom. You can use some yellow stationery too.

You say you are getting too fat , so you aren’t good at sport. You also hate running and doing morning exercises. To solve this problem，I think you must have a healthy diet and exercise every day. Especially when you are having PE lessons So that you can lose weight and keep healthy. I hope my suggestions are worth taking.

I hope my suggestions are worth taking.

Yours

Sigmund Friend

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要是心理医生对Millie求助信的回信，文中写了他的问题和对于他的问题给出了相应的建议。 同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，开头结尾相呼应。开头心理老师指出Millie的问题，并针对他的问题给予帮助 。I think you can get help from the Maths teacher.；You also hate running and doing morning exercises.这些短语和句子的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：话题作文。