Question

【题目】假如你叫李华，学校英语广播站正在招募主持人。请你用英文给负责的老

师 Sam 写一封自荐信，内容包括：你的基本信息，想做主持人的理由，以及

具体打算做的事情。

提示词语： like, improve, help, introduce, share

提示问题： ● What’s your name and hobby?

● Why do you want to be a host?

● What are you going to do?

Dear Sam,

I’d like to be a host for the English Broadcasting Station (英语广播站). __

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I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sam,

I’d like to be a host for the English Broadcasting Station. My name is Li Hua

from Class 1 Grade3. I like watching English movies and listening to English songs in

my spare time. I want to be a host because it’s a good chance to improve my oral

English, at the same time, I can help other students get more information which they

are interested in. As a host, I have some plans. I am going to not only introduce some

western culture, some good ways of learning English, but also share some beautiful

English music and poems. I’d be very happy if I become a host.

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题

本篇书面表达是围绕一篇演讲稿展开，贴近学校生活，学生有话可写。但是在写作上一定要注意审题，不要跑题或者偏题。要按要点和给出的提示问题来完成写作任务，但不能生硬的写几个句子交待了事，切记，逐条生硬的翻译，没有任何的连接词。在词汇的运用上，除了用自己熟悉的句型与词汇外，注意句型的变化，连词的使用使词义连贯流畅，同时也使得文章有层次感，有条理性。注意高级句型的运用提升文章的档次。

写作亮点：

文章开头点明主题，表明目的，然后对自己进行简要的个人介绍。句型变化多，有定语从句的使用，数量恰当，句式丰富，短语多样。关于讨论自己的竞选后的工作计划，使用了正确的时态进行表达（I am going to not only introduce some western culture…），有结尾，（I’m looking forward to your early reply.）体现了文章的完整性。